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  1. Date: 10/7/2012 10:03:00 AM

    Joann, congrats on your win with this descriptive write! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 9:05:00 PM

    Thanks for yor entry Joann. Loved this line, "Even the pool seems to melt and droop" What poetry there! Great write and a great win. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:25:00 PM

    Reads like the heat of summer..Glad fall is arriving..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 8:11:00 AM

    JOANN, congratulations with your awesome "Weather Forecast" poem in Joy's contest... have yourself a good day :-) Love PD

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 6:58:00 AM

    It is uncanny how the birds go silent when a thunder storm is eminent.... Congratulations on your win, Joann. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Joy's "Weather Forecast" contest Joann. Love Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 3:59:00 AM

    Beautiful imagery in your entry, peace before the storm. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 10:18:00 AM

    I could sense an electric surge coming reading this one Joan; just the "write one" to choose as today we are getting loads of rain..L O L))

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 9:58:00 AM

    Joann, I really enjoyed your forecast today, one of a few I read that had sunshine and rain included.. All the best for Joy's contest.. ;)

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 8:39:00 AM

    super visuals Joann.one can feel the dynamics of this forecast .. we had same 'show' here yesterday and lots of lightening to say bye to Summer ..winning wishes for Joy luv ..

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 3:45:00 AM

    Love how you bring nature into your writes, Joann. Feels thirsty here, it will have a fresher aspect after the rain. Great imagery that brings this scene to life! Have a great weekend....Mikki :)

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 8:08:00 PM

    Sounds like a lazy summer day. I love Iced Tea. I live in Texas and it has been very hot here. We need some cool weather and a lot of rain. Thanks for sharing. Joann, you read the wrong poem. It is not my Birthday. The system made an error. Please read the one for Debbie. Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 7:34:00 PM

    You've captured the extremes of a summer day! My favourite season... well done Joann! Love and hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 3:40:00 PM

    This seems to be all too true with the weather in the South! When I lived there and the temperature got way too high, there always was a huge thunderstorm that would come! Would arrive with full force and a large amount of lightning and wind! This would also be true to some extent up North! This poem described the event so very well my friend! I really enjoyed this awesome poem! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!