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In The Twilight Sky

As I climb into the shining heavens Embracing a twilight blue sky The stars wink unabashedly A sedate moon smiles benevolently Embracing a twilight blue sky A gentle wind spirits me across the milky way A sedate moon smiles benevolently I float light hearted on cool grey clouds Embracing a twilight blue sky The stars wink unabashedly I float light hearted on cool grey clouds As I climb into the shining heavens.

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 10:01:00 PM

    Remarkable moving & impressive.

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 10:43:00 PM

    he he he... I'm not letting you do this alone... I'm climbing on your back... LOL... I better stop before you think I'm a monkey who climbed your back, just to reach the twilight-ing heavens ... i love your embracing poem.. xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 4:54:00 AM

    Wow! such a superbly creative Pantoum Yas! Loved it...

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 12:22:00 AM

    I am feeling like floating in the sky!!Great Pantoum......shera

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 5:19:00 PM

    A lovely embracing poem. I want to float away with you herfe.

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 3:30:00 PM

    Play with the clouds Yasmin. Love it!! Have a lovely weekend. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 3:00:00 PM

    What an ingenious write this one is my friend! I really love this incredible poem! The feeling that I got from this write was peace and tranquility! This poem has a calm feeling to it, I love this delightful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 2:39:00 PM

    Ahhhhhh Yassssssss, you play with words so nicely... Massage them in your hands and throw on paper Gems like this... wonderful lines and form....luv xox Michael

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 2:37:00 PM

    Spectacular imagery here Yasmin! `As I climb into the shining heavens`..you lil`genius,awesome journey:-)

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 2:22:00 PM

    SWEET ENJOYMENT READING THIS LOVELY VISION OF CREATIVITY YASMIN .. PLASANT JOURNEY FASHIONED BY BEAUTIFUL LINES LUV .. NOW CLOSE YOUR EYES AND VISUALIZE HOLDING NEW BABE OF OURS AND FEEL HIS ENERGY LUV .. WE R YOUNG GRANDPARENTS SO EASY TO ENJOY FOR MANY YEARS TO COME .. THIS IS OUR 4TH ONE .. NOW EVEN .. 2 PRINCES AND 2 PRINCESSES .. THANKXX FOR YOUR LUV ..