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Shadow Puppets

Our candlelight show, entwining fingers bolder now fragrances mingle in threadless embrace, shadow puppets. *********************** Placement: 1st;(September 2012) Contest:Septolet the Puppet Sponsor:Nette Onclaud By:kash poet Date:22nd September 2012 SEPTOLET: it consists of 7 lines with a total of 14 words ... the line break comes between the 4th and 5th lines though both parts deal with the same thought to create a unified effect… to make it interesting, you must use one fabric and one flavor in your piece.

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  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:02:00 AM

    THIS is EXCELLENT ! Congratulations ! So well deserved!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:05:00 PM

    Just stopping to say HI. (well, you WERE first place in community builders for a split second anyway. haha)

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 1:38:00 AM

    nice lines! congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:45:00 AM

    Kash,, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's "SEPTOLET THE PUPPET" show.. I had fun following her contest... always~ PD

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 8:00:00 AM

    Big conrats Kash xx

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 5:39:00 AM

    I love your entry Kash. So happy you placed number One! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 5:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in this "Septolet The Puppet" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 5:12:00 PM

    Congratulations on your entry and win. I rremember doing that in Kerosene lamplight. Great shadow light. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 5:01:00 PM

    Im so proud of you..such a big win and this is my favorite of the bunch...congrats. BG

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 4:50:00 PM

    Hurrah for you. It was one of my very favorites and a very well deserved win!!

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 1:17:00 PM

    Congrad's on your most romantic win Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 11:58:00 AM

    ueri baba, Dada, congrads to my sher!

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 7:31:00 AM

    Lovely write Kash! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:50:00 PM

    CONGRATS KASH ON ANOTHER SWEET VICTORY AND FIRST PLACE SPOT LUV ..

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 7:01:00 PM

    Congratulations on a remarkable poem for this contest.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 6:00:00 PM

    CONGRATS!! on a big big win..

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 4:18:00 PM

    Ta Dah!! The winner is-----YOU!!! Great one, Kash....

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 4:06:00 PM

    Kash it in!! Your's is the only one that turned this form into a quality haiku feel with Nette's form as well-----and Kash! And X-rated too!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 2:53:00 PM

    Hooray for you Kash!!! Loved this romantic take on Nette's contest! Congratulations, and thanks always for your input! I depend on your 2nd pair of eyes! :)

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 2:19:00 PM

    I am very happy for you with this 1st place win, Kash. Congratulations! Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 7:43:00 PM

    You've said everything except that you were both lying on satin sheets...this is sexy!! Great entry for Nette! :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 1:05:00 AM

    This is an excellent entry! I love this one. I remember when I was a child, I make many shadow puppets just using my fingers. Good luck and best wishes always, Kash!!! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 1:11:00 PM

    This one is a winner for sure..I can just see those finger puppets...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 8:45:00 AM

    so poetic, such elegance

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 9:25:00 PM

    Simply very beautiful!! Excellent picture you paint here. Good luck with the contest.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 2:20:00 PM

    i'm here, kashi... just been busy!,,:) huggs and come over!

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 1:35:00 PM

    just dropping by to say HI.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 10:48:00 AM

    I have tried various poetry forms recently. The other one is "Glosa": The Cage Bird Sings.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 8:25:00 AM

    astounding poetry Kash with beauty of created images of shadow puppets.. winning wishes for Nette .. this is an exciting picture luv ..

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 3:25:00 AM

    I loved the way you have interpreted this challenge. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for visiting my poetry and your kind comments, Kash. Love, Suzette

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