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Paradise Found

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Paradise Found

Walk with me into a paradise...
Up steps to where hearts shall rise...

Rhyming letters and strumming tunes... 
Flowing dreams like floating balloons...

Floors of love with untouched peace...
Where a poets world could drip with ease...

Take a ride on this Ark of dreams...
Over land to sea we connect like streams...




inspired by Sukmawati Komala's dreams..
now my dreams too..

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:55:00 PM

    yes I am.... and why aren't you asleep... zzzzzzzzzzzzz ...LOL...pd

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:21:00 AM

    Yes, who would've thought that paradise is on our lover's eyes :)

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 2:29:00 PM

    Well done here Michael, I think those dreams have done the best inspiration possible..!

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 2:10:00 PM

    Great imagery and journey... You are obviously a very gifted writer. All of your poems I've read today say it...

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:48:00 PM

    Michael, your poem is amazing, i love the walk, this poem lit up everything inside of me. I guess i do come with light. I love your bottom couplets, it is a very clever line. I have to say one of your best lines, and images. Extremly amazing... xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:00:00 PM

    Glad you enjoyed the acrostic,Michael! You`re true inspiration to many,like Sukmawati`s too.Take Care,Brother

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 4:20:00 AM

    Beautiful write on dreams. Thanks for stopping by.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 4:08:00 PM

    they are the best dreams

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 11:33:00 AM

    full of lovely metaphors! Thanks for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 9:06:00 AM

    such beautiful words to dwell on Michael luv ..dreams r so precious and real to those of us who believe in them .. always a treasure to read your lines luv .. JG in Nana mode as new grandson arrived yesterday .. xoxo .but I feel not one minute older ..haha..

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 5:16:00 PM

    I like your ark of dreams. And Yasmin's comment is almost a poem in itself.

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico Date: 9/22/2012 5:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joann~ Yassssss is to kind. xxx
  1. Date: 9/22/2012 1:30:00 PM

    It really is beautiful like a dream, Michael. Way to get inspired!!

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 12:29:00 PM

    Michael,once again you have written a solid gem for us to enjoy:) You`re a magnificent poet and one who inspirates poets to keep writing! Have a great NY Saturday over there my brother..Outstanding and original work Mike.

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 6:43:00 AM

    I just love the line, "Where a poets world could drip with ease..." it says so much with just one line! I enjoyed this poem so very much Michael it brought a huge smile to my face my friend! The whole write is phenomenal, I love it! Fabulous piece, Great Work!!