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SIMPLY ME

Just a speck in the universe
I feel it is a must
To try and do much better,
And become a particle of dust.

And if I could graduate to that
I would like to see
If I could at least attain 
The status of a flea.

Maybe someday per chance
If I could get it right,
I would be a shining star
You look up to every night.

But if I could reach my highest goal
How perfect it would be,
To have a second chance
At simply being me......


Lynn Barany

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  1. Date: 9/23/2012 10:02:00 PM

    I love your last stanza. well done.

    Hanna Barany Avatar lynn Hanna Barany Date: 9/24/2012 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jon, how kind of you, such a nice comment. I see you have many poems, looking forward to reading them in the next few days. I do appreciate you taking the time to post a comment. Lynn Barany