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Broken girl

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Broken girl

No control over the past. No control over what happened in the dark. Cry and holler but no one herd. The pains of nightmares of a little girl. Like a ghost in the night it blindly went on Weakened by her courage and her faith. Her innocence was taking away. Losing her way with her lord. She felt alone and cold in the world. Where was her father those nights? When she was too weak too fight? Finding her way back to his arms again. She now realizes he was never gone. A broken girl found his love in a sea of hurt. As he mends a broken heart.

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:09:00 PM
    Congratulations :-)

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:47:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win Cory, nice to see you back again xx

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:59:00 AM
    Another powerful write, many congrats Cory!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:49:00 PM
    Hi Cory... congratulations with your awesome deep and darken poem* GOODNIGHT!!! xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:07:00 PM
    How nice to see this little gem from you, Cory. Welcome back from your being gone a short while. Hurry and do a BIO poem for us (Carol's contest).

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 11:21:00 AM
    How sweet! A sweet sad poem. :o)

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 7:47:00 AM
    awww, this ended up to be a very sweet poem my friend! I'm so glad I read this wonderful write this morning! I'm glad you were mended by your father, that can be a very comforting feeling, to have such a loved one come and mend your hurt heart! What a dynamic and delightful poem Cory! I really enjoyed this fantastic and wondrous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 7:32:00 AM
    The road of life are not always straight forward, there will always be some downward and upward hills - Have a lovely weekend Cory. / / Oxox love Anne-Lise :)