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Alone

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Below is the poem entitled Alone which was written by poet Jordan Dickinson. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Alone

When I feel that someone is there
In my heart grows a dreadfull scare
People say that they are your friend
Some even say, they're there till the end

But how is that so, when they do not see
Who i am, what makes me really me
To me they talk, a day if I am lucky
But all it gives me, feelings are lurky

Can there be someone who will  never leave?
Is this something my soul can really believe?

If there is, it's not for me
Alone forever, I yet will be
So the next time that you see my face
We might be dead, in another place

So i'll take these seconds and hold them dear
To lose these memories is my biggest fear
I may look tough, strong on the outside
But I can be soft, loving on the inside

For me and you, let time pursue
Since if we wait, our love is true

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  1. Date: 5/22/2013 8:26:00 AM

    Thank you for the visit and kind words. You write beautifully.

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:17:00 PM

    Love in it's purest form, is unending, and it comes in many forms, beautiful evocative write Jordan, I am glad I stopped in and discovered your treasures, have a blessed evening, may the muse continue to inspire the transpire xxx

    Dickinson Avatar Jordan Dickinson Date: 5/21/2013 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading my works I greatly appreciate it!
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 9:53:00 PM

    What a fascinating write..."Alone forever, I yet will be" wow, that is a powerful line, I really enjoyed the whole poem that you have written! I think the best stanza is the second to the last one! The one that starts, "so i'll take these seconds and hold them dear..." Those 4 lines are truly phenomenal! This is a wonderful poem Jordan, Great Work!!

    Dickinson Avatar Jordan Dickinson Date: 9/20/2012 10:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Russell I am really glad when someone appreciates what I feel Thanks