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Walking Out Together

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Walking Out Together

~Walking Out Together~ I waited patiently to hear from you But you didn’t call, what was I to do? My heart is all of a flutter My head is in a whirl I thought you could be my boy I would like to be your girl We could go out together And hold hands and maybe kiss You could be my mister And I would be your miss Our lips could meet in secret A kiss stolen oh so sweet But for them to do that you know Then first we’d have to meet…
©~GG~20/09/2012

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  1. Date: 9/22/2012 6:36:00 PM

    lovely GG,name the place lol,great write girl

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/23/2012 5:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha , I'll give you a call. xx
  1. Date: 9/22/2012 2:18:00 PM

    lol, yes, I think we've all waited for the phone to ring and realised it wasn't going to - had a chuckle, my friend

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 2:03:00 PM

    Wonderful Mandy well done, although a bit sad. reminded me of past dates, the nerves and first thumblings of romance.warm best wishes. Pete.

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 7:22:00 PM

    Whoa....how interesting ...could this be describing an internet tryst?...Completely describes the energy that new love can evoke...love to read your stuff, girl! gwendolen :)

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/22/2012 1:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wow that would be good Gwendy, but no I just get a lot of my idea's reading about and watching what goes on and then it starts the juices flowing, creative ones that is ha ha bless you sweetie xx
  1. Date: 9/21/2012 12:04:00 PM

    hi Mandy great write love the ending so unexpected, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 12:01:00 PM

    awwh, your wonderful thoughts pulled me in as i gasped in the surprising ending of this well done piece, mandy... you have my " wooot!".. :) huggs

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 11:14:00 AM

    WICKED GIRL AND WHIRL IVE USED MYSELF IN A LOPT OF MINE I LIKE THE PATTERN AND THEAM DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 4:00:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your amazing writing with us GG. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 1:59:00 AM

    soup mail

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 12:18:00 AM

    Mandy, beautifully written. just love the way you have put each word elegantly in place. xx

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/21/2012 1:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Why thank you Saleem for stopping by my work I appreciate it xx
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:43:00 PM

    Yes you would and this is oh so sweet, have you been dipping in the candy jar again Mandy, cause you smell sweet from here, xxxx Vie.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/21/2012 12:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ooh , can you imagine finding an imaginary lover in a jar of candy, its almost worth opening a sweetie jar. big hugs xx
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:17:00 PM

    wonderful Mandy, i am sure one day they will meet and your poem will come true!!!!!!!!!!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/21/2012 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well there a thought to keep one going, how nice would that be ! xx,
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 12:07:00 PM

    a cute poem.....:)))

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/21/2012 12:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Irfana, in a cute mood xx