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About This Poem

love's gift


mother's love
is an endowment
a child's sustenance

a love everlasting
immortalizing the boon

love endures
it is undying
death cannot touch

love motivates
sustains the soul
it fortifies

filial
consanguinity

tender cosmos
that pays tribute to life
transcends, lasts.

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  1. Shah Avatar
    Yesha Shah
    Date: 10/2/2012 3:22:00 AM
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    Another one for my sweet Yassie, congrats dear!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/1/2012 3:31:00 PM
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    glad to see this made the list. So well deserved, sweet lady! congratulations.
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 9/30/2012 2:32:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win in Gail Doyle's "My Endless Love" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/30/2012 8:35:00 AM
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    Congratulations my little exoctic flower , missed you where are you ? xx
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 9/30/2012 3:52:00 AM
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    CONGRATS YASMIN ON A STUNNING WRITE AND STELLAR WIN LUV .. YOUR TITLE STAES IT ALL SO SWEETLY ..
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    DEBRA FALGOUT
    Date: 9/29/2012 11:19:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win, enjoyed reading, love debra
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 9/29/2012 4:26:00 PM
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    Congratulations Yasmin. Nice to see you in the winner's list again. Love, Joyce
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    Suzette Crous
    Date: 9/29/2012 2:20:00 PM
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    You are on a roll (another well deserved win). Lovely poem :-) Congratulations on your win, Yasmin. Love, Suzette
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 9/26/2012 4:55:00 AM
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    hey...I read this one, so just saying Hi!
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    Justin Bordner
    Date: 9/23/2012 7:12:00 PM
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    Yes - Yes Yes - Love is a procreator, ergo the cosmos builds, even upon despair & suffering - I like your calibration Yasmin - J.A.B. %
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 9/22/2012 1:51:00 PM
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    Beautiful on ever step in this poem You are an amazing lady and I am so proud to call you my friend... love n long hugs Michael
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 9/22/2012 9:32:00 AM
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    :) E N C O R E!!
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    harry horsman
    Date: 9/21/2012 2:47:00 PM
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    wonderful tender, and a joy to read...
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/21/2012 4:30:00 AM
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    We who have experienced love the basis of our mother, and given the love for our children know how much it means. - But unfortunately, not all children who experienced it. Very good poem Yasmin. Have a wonderful weekend. / / Love oxox Anne-Lise :)
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 9/21/2012 3:42:00 AM
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    You wrote of the power of love so tenderly and reminded me of its everlasting benefits...it really is a child's sustenance...the world would be a better place if more children felt a better bond with their mothers...Nice write, Yas....gwendolen :)
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/21/2012 1:10:00 AM
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    You have such a wide vocabulary sweetheart I envy you and the way you use it . Lovely sweetie xx
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 9/20/2012 9:11:00 PM
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    a supreme beauty of emotion yasmin .. Mother love is most wonderful and so very special .. good luck luv .. a sure top ten ..
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 9/20/2012 8:19:00 PM
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    this is beautiful, my friend. Are you thinking of your mom this day? It was strange when I decided to try the endless Love contest, and thought who I most enjoyed being with, it was my sisters. my poor mom and others coming in second! (the melatonin helps I think. I slept 5.5 hours instead of 3.5 last night. hahaha)
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 9/20/2012 2:13:00 PM
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    gentle the flow, sentimental the thoughts, mareey.. you mother would love as i did too!... splendid!..priya huggs!
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 9/20/2012 2:05:00 PM
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    Such deep thoughts Yassie!! Wonderful vocabulary too! Light & Love
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 9/20/2012 1:59:00 PM
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    Hi Yasmin, your poem is really touching. I wish i had that endowment.. I know every mother loves in her own way.. And my mothers love was keeping me healthy ... She did a wonderful job, now with her Alzheimer, I'm a bad daughter. because, I'm the one who has forgotten all the love death did not touch at the moment. Love the ending of your poem... and guess what this is the first time i have ever seen this form. And you made it beautiful and adorable.. xox~pd
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    kash poet
    Date: 9/20/2012 9:56:00 AM
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    A great poem on motherly love here.Yeah I am a Lion...every where!

    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 9/21/2012 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey,everywhere includes my home also!!!
    khan Avatar yasmin khan Date: 9/20/2012 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    chipmunk at home, lol!
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    Black Eyed Susan
    Date: 9/20/2012 8:26:00 AM
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    that's how it should be :)
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 9/20/2012 8:06:00 AM
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    Beautiful write Yas...loved the emotions of motherhood penned here. challenging form chosen dear. good luck.
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 9/20/2012 6:47:00 AM
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    Wow, what a powerful and a wonderful Rengay my friend! I love the fact that you went out and tried the Rengay form, very awesome! And the subject for the poem is timeless, love is eternal, and forever! I love the verse, "love endures, it is undying, death cannot touch" what a beautiful verse that is! What a gorgeous and delightful poem this is Yasmin, I truly love this write! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 9/20/2012 5:51:00 AM
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    Great poem,Yas! And you yourself is a gift to PoetrySoup:) Have a wonderful day my friend! Take Care Always,Arild


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