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I slipped off my smile
 
and removed those tight shoes.....

alone in my room

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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 10/5/2012 5:45:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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    Tahera Mannan
    Date: 10/2/2012 10:52:00 PM
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    Lovely Carrie. Many congrats for this win.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 10/2/2012 1:22:00 PM
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    CARRIE, Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's "Single Senryu" contest. ~ :-) xox~ PD
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    kash poet
    Date: 10/2/2012 6:47:00 AM
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    Love this Carrie!Congrats on your win!!
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    Lee Ramage
    Date: 10/1/2012 9:20:00 PM
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    aw... I feel the relief... Great poem, well done and congratulations on your win. Lee
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 10/1/2012 6:05:00 PM
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    Congratulations on a spectacular win.
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    olusegun Arowolo
    Date: 10/1/2012 4:36:00 PM
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    Nice piece,Carrie...Congratulations on your win..
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 10/1/2012 2:24:00 PM
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    ONe of my favorites here! Congrats on the win.
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 10/1/2012 1:21:00 PM
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    Congratulations Carrie, nice one xx
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    Suzette Crous
    Date: 10/1/2012 1:15:00 PM
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    Oh! I know that feeling of being able to relax away from the public glare. :-) Congratulations on your win with this excellent Senryu, Carrie.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 9/26/2012 6:09:00 AM
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    Great one for the contest..I hope that you didn't have on those tight shoes though..Sometimes in life we do those things_like wear what is uncomfortable and smile while doing it ..Thanks for stopping by ..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 9/21/2012 9:22:00 PM
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    wow, this is AWESOME. So true of people too!!
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    kash poet
    Date: 9/20/2012 7:42:00 AM
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    Good senryu here Carrie!Best wishes for the contest.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 9/19/2012 9:50:00 PM
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    Hi Carrie,, great senryu,,, thank you for sharing your wonderful verse* good night :-) Linda aka~ PD
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    ilene bauer
    Date: 9/19/2012 3:24:00 PM
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    so much revealed in so few words! bravo!
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 9/19/2012 9:24:00 AM
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    What a brilliantly written poem my friend! This is a fabulous write Carrie, I love how you wrote this delightful poem! Sometimes its very easy to slip out of your smile when you are alone, it just happens at times! Very awesome piece, Great Work!!