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Senryu on Loneliness

Septic.
Cold, wet days.
Glittering, cheapened stone;
filtered rain
falling
home

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 10:53:00 PM

    I love this saying, For every happening there is a reason. hope u are ok. Love Terry xoxo

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 10:53:00 PM

    I love this saying, For every happening there is a reason. hope u are ok. Love Terry xoxo

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 3:01:00 AM

    Well done my friend. Thanks for showing for syllable. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 9:04:00 PM

    Nice visual, and home; alone, as we share solitude, with others in the halls of our mind. Loneliness is accompanied by throngs making it worse. I find myself writing light hearted nonsense these days and am amazed. Usually a group of cold wet days drives me into despair. Maybe that is what some call "balance":-)

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 12:18:00 PM

    The loneliness is hard to bear. Well written Zac. Have a wonderful Sunday afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 1:32:00 PM

    descriptive and well composed, zac... all images gel to create a solid, pained mood...:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 9:42:00 PM

    Zac, love your senryu, deep, and lonely.. thank you for sharing your wonderful verse* good night :-) Linda aka~ PD