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  1. Date: 9/23/2012 5:49:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 8:39:00 AM
    Such a sad and compelling poem, Gail. I love the spiritual quality to it, but realize it is a poem of loss. Best wishes in the contest. I'm sending you a Soup mail. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:41:00 PM
    Nice Senryu! Good luck in the contest! And thank you for your comments on my latest. Caroline. :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:30:00 PM
    Ah! Lovely entry Gail! Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 6:47:00 PM
    beautiful image of his creation. love vie

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 6:44:00 PM
    Looks like a competitive entry for BE Susan's contest.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 6:14:00 PM
    This is a truly magnificent write my friend! I love the tenderness of the poem, a grace inspired write! I'm utterly amazed at the delight you used for this write! I really enjoyed this incredible poem this evening! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 6:11:00 PM
    nicely penned wishes..... love...Joseph

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 5:16:00 PM
    Awesome! Love the title,and the poem is magnificent,Gail:) Missed ya`,now am finally off work for the next two week or so.Back to the Soup again;-) Hugs and Love,Arild