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lovebugs copulate

lovebugs copulate everywhere in just mid-air.. splat another death

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  1. Date: 9/19/2012 2:02:00 PM

    Yes very dangerous affair! Thanks for your comment Sara. warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 12:06:00 PM

    *.* Smile, If I Did Not Know How Very Beautiful & Precious Your Beauty Truly Is By Now, My Dear Sweet Beautiful Sara ˜ Then My Heart May Not Be Allowed To Chuckle Aloud Whenever Spotting Certain Moments From Your Amazing Beauty Such As This Intriguing Treasure I May Say ˜ I Can Feel Your Loveliness Inside Right Now; Sooo Beautiful ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 11:04:00 AM

    reminds me of driving through ocala florida!! thanks for hosting a great contest and for my placement

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 10:41:00 AM

    very clever haiku, Sara. lol, what a surprise last line - I wasn't expecting that : )

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 8:41:00 AM

    what a wonderful element of surprise, sara... you expressed this so nonchalantly but with flair!.. :) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 7:20:00 AM

    oh my, you are becoming a master at the twists of haiku. Loved that final line!!! Poor lady bugs. They are my favorite of insects, and the firefly too.

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 1:37:00 AM

    wonderful haiku penned by you here, Sara! Thanks a lot for liking my entry and placing it in your contest, I really enjoyed doing it.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 5:13:00 PM

    Made me laugh! Funny one....BG

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 3:50:00 PM

    Ha ha ha, this one cracks me up my friend! I really enjoyed the fascinating poem, such a well crafted Haiku Sara! The last line is ingenious, simply perfect! I love this poem, Great Work!!