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pockets full of pebbles

You gather my words like pockets full of pebbles, so when you need to hurt me, you have them there, ready to throw in my face!

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 3:45:00 AM

    Great, powerful, in so few words.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 2:58:00 PM

    wow, this is good, very good...hope to read more,

    Meyer Avatar L.Ruby Meyer Date: 12/20/2012 12:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Much appreciated harry x peace Ruby
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:07:00 AM

    Sad, but such a great metaphoric description. Loved it.

    Meyer Avatar L.Ruby Meyer Date: 12/20/2012 12:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your thoughts Anthony X Peace Ruby
  1. Date: 9/30/2012 8:07:00 PM

    this poem makes me feel sad. warm thoughts, Ralph

    Meyer Avatar L.Ruby Meyer Date: 10/21/2012 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes indeed Ralph, it is sad that people feel the need to be that way.Thanks for your input, x Peace Ruby
  1. Date: 9/18/2012 2:35:00 AM

    Short sweet and one of the best I've read. The metaphor could not have been any better.

    Meyer Avatar L.Ruby Meyer Date: 10/21/2012 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Anthony, that means a lot to me, as I've read some of your pieces, and you have a real talent for expression. x Peace Ruby
  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:47:00 PM

    nice....

    Meyer Avatar L.Ruby Meyer Date: 10/21/2012 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Amy, much appreciated. x Peace Ruby