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Lens

a long neck and curling breast
quickly passed through my wide lens
closer closer I did get
and then my sun did set

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  1. Date: 9/24/2012 6:38:00 AM

    Ha! Just lovely! Love the symbolism in effect. Nice!

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 11:55:00 PM

    Hi was it a swan? they can be vicious one of them would set any sun if it turned , Nice litter write here and thank you for reading one of my old poems, it could do with a revamp, I have learned form my older ones . bless you i will read more of yours

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 2:19:00 PM

    Clever again and evocative

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 2:06:00 PM

    Interesting work..I wonder what happened..Thanks for stopping by..Sara