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'The Beating of Hearts'

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'The Beating of Hearts'


We could pretend it’s the end, start loving each other all over again I know you want to, you still look at me in that way as if to say, "I want to make you mine" I knew that day I've lost it, could not control the beating of my heart they say a woman's heart beats faster than a man's that first night I couldn't tell the difference it was like your heart knew mine needed yours the music it made, had me floating all I could think of was how handsome you looked still don’t fathom, you thinking I had this to die for smile I just knew you held me captive, chemistry never played a part we were just two parts of a puzzle connecting, completing in the end answering all the questions my heart once asked now here we are, it's been a while yet it still feels like it’s that first time when I realized without question, you are the beating of my heart
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  1. Date: 10/4/2012 10:15:00 AM
    Belated congratulations! I love it! You romantic you!! : )

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 3:17:00 AM
    Excellent write, really...Many congratulations on an awesome win with this wonderful poem!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 4:41:00 PM
    Oh mercy me Wilma!...here you go again! All apologies to the judge but...why the heck didn't this place first?...Exquisite...Tim

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 2:28:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Gail Doyle's "My Endless Love" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 8:29:00 AM
    Love thse last two lines Wilma they round of an awesome poem . Congratulations xx

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 3:49:00 AM
    SUPER CONGRATS WILMA ON A STUNNING WRITE AND STELLAR WIN MY FRIEND SHARING ENDLESS LUV .. WE R BACK TO BRISK DAYS AND COOL NIGHTS IN 50'S .. BYE BYE BEACH FORNOTHER SEASON ..BUT WE R ENJOYING OUR NEW GRANDSON BORN LAST WEEK SO DON'T MIND BEING INDOORS .. WHAT'S UP WITH U?

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 4:13:00 PM
    Sincere and emotional. Congratulations on your win. Nice to find you here Wilma. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 2:10:00 PM
    A brilliant write. Enjoyed reading it. Glad to see you back again, writing from the heart. Congratulations on your win, Wilma. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 1:40:00 PM
    Amazing piece from a hear made of love and a soul soaked in tallent and beauty.. so much love this poem.. in my favs it goes CTH.... love and hugs forever from ME....xooxo

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 9:19:00 PM
    breathtaking lines as only sweet Wilma can create to excite the readers .. so deep .. so intoxicating .. I think Ron and I feel we r each others breath and heart beat .. so my friend u hit a bulls eye with this gorgeous pieve ..

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 8:28:00 PM
    Beautiful romantic and sensual all wrapped in one, the essence of you Wilma, love and light vie

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 6:18:00 PM
    so well put Wilma. A succesful poem is that which aptly describes one's feelings and thought and circumstance. Pbviously this is one of those. Lovely

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 4:48:00 PM
    Ah, you are a true romantic, Wilma! Gives the reader a nice feeling knowing your life is back on track. Reads like a fairy tale brought into reality a veritable prince charming and his sweet, lovely princess!! Keep well and stay happy! Mikki

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:10:00 AM
    awww, what a lovely write, my friend. Hope you are having a great week lfde

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 7:02:00 AM
    this is so cleverly written, Wilma, but i disagree with the form "light poetry" this is sensationally profound...!!!

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:18:00 PM
    oooh la la, that last line. WOW. This is wonderful and romantic. A GREAT poem, Wilma.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 5:35:00 PM
    so sweet and romantic! an awesome write, Wilma. Congratulations for a well-done poem. I've enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and for taking your time to read my work and your kind comments as well. Have a wonderful day always!!! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:22:00 PM
    awwwe..you romantic you,Wilma:) I love these delightful poems of yours,you capture the reader from first line.Hope you`re well,nothing new yet from my pen.I want to WRITE,but I CAN`t :-) See Ya`Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 1:25:00 PM
    Ohh...Wilma a great romantic poem from you !!Love this!

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 11:46:00 AM
    yeow, wilms!...if the all the loving gets to be too much for you, please send the residue in my direction.. such a sensitive and heartfelt write; ' I just know you held me, captive '.. :) huggs

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