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too much at one time

too many questions
too many decisions
my head is heavy in thought
i hit the pillow like a cinder block

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  1. Date: 9/28/2012 5:46:00 PM

    Riveting write. Each line directed me to an epic ending. Didn't expect that. Very very clever poet!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 8:54:00 AM

    But it's good to have a pillow to sleep on, rest your head and thoughts. Good poems Karen. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 8:05:00 PM

    a delightful write karen! sometimes i experience the feeling you've poured in here, too! thanks a lot for sharing!!!! have a wonderful day always!!! hugs:) Leonora