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northeasterly wind

northeasterly wind
whips the surf palm tree branches...
shore birds catch flight soar  

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  1. Date: 9/18/2012 8:27:00 AM

    your holiday has inspired some beautiful haiku, Sara - I can imagine you thinking of this one as you were on the golf cart trip

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:24:00 PM

    Wondrous imagery, Sara. You have to love those shore birds.

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 4:42:00 PM

    We have plenty of shore birds, but no palm trees in New Jersey. Good write as usual, Sara.

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 4:39:00 PM

    A very excellent talented write my friend in just a few lines. PS Hope all is well for you in the home front. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 3:28:00 PM

    Beautiful description in just a few words

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 12:05:00 PM

    I agree, this has very nice imagery within this masterfully written poem! I love this incredible and superior poem! Wonderful Haiku, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:55:00 AM

    Very nice haiku here Sara!Great imagery!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:48:00 AM

    so descriptive, sara... your wind takes me to new heights!... a fascinating 'ku!.. how's karter?..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:14:00 AM

    great imagery in this haiku

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:10:00 AM

    well written!! enjoyed reading!