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A Place So Dark

You are poison
Poison for my heart
In a way that no one can know
A god's betrayal so solemnly unfolds
In a place so dark there are no holes
Only blackness that unfolds and unfolds
Into sentiments untold
Buried deep beneath my pain, sorrow and desolate shame
Is this place so hollow 
even I
Fail, am siezed
Cease to exist
Across from me the danger of my weakness sits
Writhing, convulsing 
beneath the weight of this
My past, my desires, my values
leak from every orifice

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  1. Date: 9/16/2012 9:36:00 PM

    Zaida, you are easily one of the most talented poets here on the Soup. I love your writes..One love. Joy Wells

    Ruiz Avatar Zaida Ruiz Date: 9/17/2012 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh wow. I'm deeply humbled and honored by your words. Thank you so much.