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  1. Date: 9/16/2012 7:52:00 AM
    Gee whiz, this is super emotive and chilling...conjures a million scenarios of the agonizing mind....the sheets torn in the middle is a powerful image...It will reveal a different angle each time read....The you tube video u forwarded from dear Lizzie Wesley inspired a poem that I posted today...I will also thank Lizzie for curbing my dry spell...completely opposite topic from this one...Nicely done, Jag.

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 5:48:00 AM
    Wet sheets! Did you pee the bed? I would never have guessed, maybe it was your cup of spilled tea! I'm just being silly; this is rather deep with a dark side. Well done!

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 2:21:00 AM
    Very scary write.