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Parting Impressions

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Parting Impressions


 
Parting Impressions Baed on My Photo Poem which can be seen on my Twitter URL https://twitter.com/kapoor_/status/246124905899364352/photo/1 And on World Art foundation by copying and pasting following URL http://wafglobal.ning.com/photo/golden-rays-of-sun?context=user Parting Impressions O, Golden rays of returning Sun You are leaving your parting impressions On these lovely yellow and dark brown clouds While softly touching their lips By the aroma of your enchanting lights And saying to them a lasting Good bye. Ravindra Kanpur India 14092012

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 6:11:00 AM

    I am so sorry it has taken me this long to get back to you on the comments you have left on my poetry. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment Ravindra. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 6:05:00 AM

    wonderfully written Rav

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 11:32:00 AM

    Great write sir. Especially, 'the aroma of enchanting light', loved it sir.. :-)

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:22:00 AM

    I am so glad to have found this new poem from you. I lioke the soft kiss of the sun, but often get burned if not careful. Sort of like with people.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 1:20:00 PM

    great write Rav keep em coming

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 1:45:00 AM

    Personified like human....... Beautiful one, short poem, but one could spend whole day writing on it.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 10:05:00 PM

    It is a beautiful imagery, Ravindra! In line 3, perhaps if you place the word "clouds" ahead in the line after "these", it will sound better: "On these clouds of spellbound yellow and molten brown".. On the 4th line, since you address the sun with "you" I would put it there too: "while softly you touch their lips", and I would add even "thick" in front of lips for the sake of rhythm. And in the last line, "To send them a last good bye." Hope it's ok if I share that with you. Nice imagery! :)

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 9/19/2012 5:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Caroline for yr wonderful & kind suggestion but I have placed this Poem as a Photo Poem & it has already been sent on all my links. I appreciate your words & wonderful suggestions. I can make a second Photo for you in the format you like it more & mail it to you as gift from a PS friend but pl. send me what actually you want it to be by your mail on kapoor_skk@yahoo.com. Love & best wishes
  1. Date: 9/14/2012 10:29:00 PM

    majestic beauty Ravindra my friend .. graceful imagery and congrats on the many outlets it is featured .. thankxxx for soupmails which I will read soon .. my youngest son and his wife home with us from military expecting first baby 9/22 .. we r so excited luv .. how is your son..married yet? our children bring us so much joy as do your phenomenal poems ..

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 7:29:00 AM

    Clouds always fascinate me Ravi, their shape, color, when rimmed with light and sometimes so fleet as they dance across the sky. You've painted beauty with so few words.

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 9/14/2012 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Elizabeth for your beautiful words. Their beauty is such that any one can fall in love with them. More on your page..Ravindra
  1. Date: 9/14/2012 2:27:00 AM

    the nature's beauty in any way remains wid us always:)beautiful write

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 9/14/2012 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Madhu. I will visit your Poems soon. You are welcome in Poetry Soup's beautiful family. Ravindra
  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:27:00 PM

    Hello Dear Ravindra, stopping by to read a few poems tonight... i will look it up tonight... always a pleasure in reading your poems... always~pd

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 9/14/2012 9:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks PD. I was about to finish your recent poem when there was some problem with internet connection. I will post it shortly. With best wishes..Ravindra
  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:11:00 PM

    wow, this is really beautiful, Ravindra. A great posting for the fall season!

    Kapoor Avatar Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 9/14/2012 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea for your wonderful words. More on your Poem soon..Ravindra
  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:09:00 PM

    Beauty in any form always leaves it's impressions on all of us. Some of these cling to our hearts and becomes a part of memory treasure. With best wishes ...Ravindra