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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:24:00 PM

    Carol, i like cider... good senryu..xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:18:00 AM

    So expressively intense in its concision...Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 3:23:00 PM

    Very good haiku poem, says alot in 3 verses, to describe fall.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:35:00 PM

    A true Fall scene here, Sunshine...lovely! Thanks for visits and comments. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 6:44:00 AM

    is it getting cold in your area? it has been in the 60's here in GA and the humidity dropped. it feels so nice! this is a great little poem!!

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:24:00 AM

    Come and share the cider with me. Our leaves are dropping and the colors of fall are beautiful. The harvest is almost finished and the country side looks so gold instead of green. Nice senryu Carol. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 1:55:00 PM

    Excellent. what a wonderful write. Thank you for your kindness. Pete.

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 8:54:00 AM

    A great picture with words.......... George

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 5:58:00 AM

    Stunning imagery Carol, welcome back hun.. Thank you for your kind comments always.. enjoy the weekend:) love Wilma

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 8:28:00 PM

    Seeing this one again. I want some of that cider!

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 5:02:00 PM

    Yes fall is upon us, can taste the cider now

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:40:00 PM

    little early for that,nice expressed Senryu, Thanhs for sharing it.God bless you, Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:01:00 PM

    Ohhh NOT yet here LOL my trees are just beginning to blush! Light & Love

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  1. Date: 9/18/2012 11:49:00 AM

    enjoyed your lovely autumn sneryu.

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:47:00 AM

    just enjoying this lovely senryu again x

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 5:03:00 AM

    Simple and well expressed senryu. Well done. Tfs

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 5:44:00 PM

    What a delightful read. Love the ending especially. Thank you so much sweetie for sharing this delight! Inspiring and alive! Hugs!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:43:00 AM

    Very nice Senryu here Carol!Love the imagery.

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 10:28:00 PM

    very impressive senryu my dear Carol! this is a vivid picture of fall season giving me a joyful vicarious experience while reading it. thank you so much for sharing! love, leonora

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 4:48:00 PM

    Beauty and get flavor all at one time..Great work..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for stopping by..I hope that your trip is a great one..Sara

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 2:50:00 PM

    oh, love this one, Carol - 'Sunshine' suits you well x

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 7:38:00 AM

    wonderful senryu Carol, loved the read. Wish you happy holidays, enjoy yourself and be back soon. you will be missed at my pages!

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 5:31:00 AM

    It is a great senryu,Carol.Beautiful scene.A deep theme.With love,Fabiyas

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 11:47:00 AM

    *.* This Holds Such A Beautiful Hue, My Dear Sweet Beautiful, Beautiful Carol ˜ Autumn Tis Such A Joyous, Colourful & Wonderful Season & To Add A Bit Of Warmth With A Cup Of Cider ˜ Smiling Faces, Hugs & Gifts In Love ˜ "Sooo Beautiful" ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 5:17:00 AM

    wonderful theme here in this wonderful Senryu, and yes i would love to share a warm cider with you Carol...

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 2:31:00 PM

    smells, tastes and looks good Carol. Autumn is such a special time to savor. Lovely verse!

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 11:05:00 AM

    Nice. Brief and beautiful

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 8:58:00 PM

    YUM, I love how you ended with the cider. have an AWESOME week away on that trip. CArol.(or was it longer?) LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 2:36:00 PM

    The words are related to haiku but the theme is of Senryu related very deeply with life. It's a great sacrifice penned. Loved always, bl