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Carol Sunshine Brown
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Fall Season
trees are left naked
leaves drop down upon the ground
warm cider to share
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 1/11/2013 9:24:00 PM
Carol, i like cider... good senryu..xox~LINDA
Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/1/2012 2:18:00 AM
So expressively intense in its concision...Love, Hanitra
Angela Yousef
Date: 9/29/2012 3:23:00 PM
Very good haiku poem, says alot in 3 verses, to describe fall.
Joy Wellington
Date: 9/26/2012 9:35:00 PM
A true Fall scene here, Sunshine...lovely! Thanks for visits and comments. One love. Joy Wells
Doris Culverhouse
Date: 9/25/2012 6:44:00 AM
is it getting cold in your area? it has been in the 60's here in GA and the humidity dropped. it feels so nice! this is a great little poem!!
Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/24/2012 9:24:00 AM
Come and share the cider with me. Our leaves are dropping and the colors of fall are beautiful. The harvest is almost finished and the country side looks so gold instead of green. Nice senryu Carol. Hope all is well with you. love phyl
Peter Dome
Date: 9/22/2012 1:55:00 PM
Excellent. what a wonderful write. Thank you for your kindness. Pete.
yasmin khan
Date: 9/22/2012 12:29:00 PM
great senryu Carol and a beautiful profile picture..good to see you sunshine!
George Aul
Date: 9/21/2012 8:54:00 AM
A great picture with words.......... George
Wilma Neels
Date: 9/21/2012 5:58:00 AM
Stunning imagery Carol, welcome back hun.. Thank you for your kind comments always.. enjoy the weekend:) love Wilma
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/20/2012 8:28:00 PM
Seeing this one again. I want some of that cider!
Anthony Nutter
Date: 9/20/2012 5:02:00 PM
Yes fall is upon us, can taste the cider now
Erich Goller
Date: 9/20/2012 2:40:00 PM
little early for that,nice expressed Senryu, Thanhs for sharing it.God bless you, Hugs!Erich
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/20/2012 2:01:00 PM
Ohhh NOT yet here LOL my trees are just beginning to blush! Light & Love
david scott
Date: 9/18/2012 12:27:00 PM
SOUNDS RELAXING PEACE OF MIND FEEL NICE WRITE XX DAVIDSCOTT
Joann Grisetti
Date: 9/18/2012 11:49:00 AM
enjoyed your lovely autumn sneryu.
jack horne
Date: 9/18/2012 9:47:00 AM
just enjoying this lovely senryu again x
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/18/2012 5:03:00 AM
Simple and well expressed senryu. Well done. Tfs
Suzanne C. Goudreau
Date: 9/17/2012 5:44:00 PM
What a delightful read. Love the ending especially. Thank you so much sweetie for sharing this delight! Inspiring and alive! Hugs!
kash poet
Date: 9/16/2012 10:43:00 AM
Very nice Senryu here Carol!Love the imagery.
Leonora Galinta
Date: 9/15/2012 10:28:00 PM
very impressive senryu my dear Carol! this is a vivid picture of fall season giving me a joyful vicarious experience while reading it. thank you so much for sharing! love, leonora
Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/15/2012 4:48:00 PM
Beauty and get flavor all at one time..Great work..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for stopping by..I hope that your trip is a great one..Sara
jack horne
Date: 9/15/2012 2:50:00 PM
oh, love this one, Carol - 'Sunshine' suits you well x
Yesha Shah
Date: 9/15/2012 7:38:00 AM
wonderful senryu Carol, loved the read. Wish you happy holidays, enjoy yourself and be back soon. you will be missed at my pages!
FABIYAS M V
Date: 9/15/2012 5:31:00 AM
It is a great senryu,Carol.Beautiful scene.A deep theme.With love,Fabiyas
tristen temple
Date: 9/14/2012 11:47:00 AM
*.* This Holds Such A Beautiful Hue, My Dear Sweet Beautiful, Beautiful Carol ˜ Autumn Tis Such A Joyous, Colourful & Wonderful Season & To Add A Bit Of Warmth With A Cup Of Cider ˜ Smiling Faces, Hugs & Gifts In Love ˜ "Sooo Beautiful" ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*
harry horsman
Date: 9/14/2012 5:17:00 AM
wonderful theme here in this wonderful Senryu, and yes i would love to share a warm cider with you Carol...
elizabeth wesley
Date: 9/13/2012 2:31:00 PM
smells, tastes and looks good Carol. Autumn is such a special time to savor. Lovely verse!
Sizo Hlophe
Date: 9/13/2012 11:05:00 AM
Nice. Brief and beautiful
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/12/2012 8:58:00 PM
YUM, I love how you ended with the cider. have an AWESOME week away on that trip. CArol.(or was it longer?) LUv, Andrea
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