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fighting chance

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Below is the poem entitled fighting chance which was written by poet Carma Reed. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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fighting chance

when i think of you........ 
the world turns in as 
my heart stops to beat.
catching that one last 
breath to give it a 
fighting chance, to gain life,
is no longer toleratied.
You scensor my being like 
a poisionace snake, leaving 
me in a emptyness tomb, 
bleeding eyes of shameless 
grief, but i live to,
strengthen the core, 
and return the priceless favor.

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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:35:00 AM

    Beautiful! I feel your strength renewed! Cynthia

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 10/19/2012 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Cynthia, for it has for I will always fight for what I believe.....
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 12:57:00 PM

    Amazing work~I really enjoyed reading this verse. Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem on 9/11. Always, Laura

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 9/12/2012 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks a mill laura, your work is amazing as well.. Carma
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 8:14:00 AM

    WOW SPEECHLESS,LOVE IT CARMA

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 9/12/2012 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    there i go again leaving you with nothing to say, but i bet the image was great.. lol
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 5:45:00 AM

    Excellent piece, lets the reader feel the emotions in this write.

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 9/12/2012 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you much, the hard truth and nothing but the truth.....