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The Heart Of The Ocean

Starring down the iron, 
In A belivient disorder, 
My eyes begin to twitch, 
My lips begin to quiver 
Uttering: ICE~BURG Ahead
As my heart turns cold, my
Body lies stiff ignoring the 
Walls that are about to
Wash under~feet.

Chasing these cold n' dark
Hall~ways i am no longer, 
Drowning in fear, as the
Light begins to dim, closing 
Eyes to pray, begging for
life to abort ship, as i look
to see my love is not lost, 
for it is the heart of the 
ocean i long to spare my
life for tru~loves promise.


 

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  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:39:00 PM

    Brilliant Carma. Sweet write. I enjoyed the read. Love, Khalid

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 9/17/2012 6:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you khalid for the time to read glad you enjoyed it. hugs
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 12:59:00 PM

    Another awesome one! Always, Laura

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 9/12/2012 5:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you laura always!
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 7:56:00 AM

    sweet words Carma,great write of love promise

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 9/12/2012 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    these are the words i speak for you in love and promise to your heart.
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:59:00 AM

    Good description. Never lose faith in love. Lovely and well written. xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 9/12/2012 5:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you anne~lise my faith will always carry on.