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On My Every Wall

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On My Every Wall

My spirit resides in a small family’s home. I serve to divide up the rooms of that place. I haven’t got legs; therefore, I can’t roam. I guess what they see of me there is my face. . . a surface, which smooth, is painted beige-white. No ears do I have, and yet I hear all. No eyes, yet I see everything day and night. No lungs, yet I breathe; I am every wall. When holidays come, I inhale such delight: the sweet scent of cinnamon and fresh baked bread. I love it when sun through the drapes casts its light, and also I’m warmed hearing everything said . . . and sounds of the children laughing with glee, the soft sounds of love making from their folks’ room and their music, when played, which permeates me, dispelling those lonely times I feel such gloom. . . . for there was a time the kids colored on me. Their mother got angry, but all I recall is how small hands scribbled on me eagerly. Now I long for their touch on my every wall! For the Contest of Black Eyed Susan: If These Walls Could Talk... Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 9/23/2012 1:12:00 PM

    Ahhh if these walls could talk lol. Which brings me to your comment on "Where's the Blame". It is an ex girlfriend and yes a special one. That's all I'm saying Hun lol. Hugs Michael

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/23/2012 1:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I figured that!
  1. Date: 9/21/2012 9:19:00 PM

    Andrea, I love how you gave a voice to the walls of a happy home! And the last line is wonderful. Congrats on your win!! Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 11:06:00 AM

    This is a nicely penned poem,Andrea.Congratulations on your well deserved win!

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 8:50:00 AM

    You've made your "walls and home" sound like a happy place to be........crayon scribbles and all! What a fun and warm place to enjoy your family, Andrea. loved this! (ps.....yes, I've been taking a respite from the Soup....but thanks for asking. It was time for a little break.....but I'll check in now and then). You are one of the few who noticed.....so I appreciate your concern! :) Thank you!

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 4:27:00 AM

    I loved this one Andie. 'for there was a time the kids colored on me.'favorite line....Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 1:57:00 PM

    Congrats on this lovely poem. Yes, if only wall could talk what stories they would tell ha ha. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 12:15:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 5:57:00 AM

    Aw, Andrea, that reminds me of my Gramma's old home and her old flora wallpaper. Brings back memories. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 3:25:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 12:59:00 PM

    Beautiful and sweet write Andrea! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:27:00 AM

    The story of happy walls. congratulations Andrea. Lvoe, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 8:00:00 AM

    CONGRATS ANDREA ON AN EXTRAORDINARY WRITE AND EXCELLENT WIN LUV .. ALWAYS A RARE TREAT TO READ YOUR WORK ..

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 6:06:00 AM

    Oh, I like it Andrea, congratulations on your win..so creative...Cheers!!!!!!!have a blessed day always!! (^_^) hugs! **Maria**

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 7:51:00 PM

    MY BIG HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY FRIEND!!! :) HUGS Leonora

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 6:11:00 PM

    Naughty kids coloring on the walls oh my I would have gotten a spanking! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 6:04:00 PM

    Congrats Andrea...a lovely piece for a super win. Blessings. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 12:12:00 PM

    all in the name of a home full of joy, andie... congrats with huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 11:30:00 AM

    Congrats Andrea on another top ten win with this excellent write!

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your #2 win in my contest! I especially loved the last stanza - very powerful :)

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:26:00 AM

    ANDREA, congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:23:00 AM

    Congratulations Andy on your terrific win here , well done xx

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 2:48:00 PM

    Wally sounds like a sweetheart. :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 2:28:00 PM

    what a beautiful write, my friend - a big winner for sure

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 8:16:00 PM

    All the best in the contest Andrea...a great write indeed! One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 7:41:00 PM

    i love your take on the hear all walls. Very different from mine. Thaks for your comment on my Doggie with no pedigree. I don't know where that came from, has nothing to do with any thing. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 2:15:00 PM

    An excellent tale of walls! love it! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 6:42:00 AM

    Imagine writing about being a wall, you take the cake with this one luv, so clever and a great story. I think you have chalked up another win! :) Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 8:58:00 PM

    Andrea... Susan will love this... good luck in the contest... xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 8:41:00 PM

    Excellent personofication of walls in this poem Andrea!Enjoyed the read.(write the date below your poem)

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 3:04:00 PM

    My butt still smarts from the hair brush spanking my mother gave me for lipsticking the wall one day. Another winner, dear Andrea. Love, daver

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