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Autumn Silver Gloss Small Pearls


                                        Raindrops roll on my window
                                             like tears on a cheek
                                           The day is gray and wet
                                            but you are still beautiful
                                         Outside my window I have a
                                    rose bush with many raindrops on.
                                          Raindrops looks like many
                                           sliver gloss small pearls
                                           They can not be picked
                                              you get no bouquet                     
                                       A small spider web between
                                           some branches are also          
                                embellished with sliver gloss small pearls
                                    Yet there are two roses on my bush
                                         one for you and one for me
                                             The day gray and wet
                                               and autumn is here
                                             Still have my rose bush
                                          their beauty and ornaments





11.09.2012
A-L Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:15:00 AM

    simple and beautiful.....enjoyed reading..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/28/2013 11:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Mehnaz. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 7:15:00 PM

    Lovely Anne ;} I want some pearls,,, some for you and some for me ;} xoxoxo's Debbie ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/6/2013 4:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:33:00 AM

    I Love this so much! Beautiful..JL

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/14/2012 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Juniper. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/4/2012 10:30:00 PM

    A beautiful moment sculpted with words into full relief... Really nice. Thanks!!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/5/2012 1:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem and wrote comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:35:00 PM

    Great imagery. Loved it.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/20/2012 2:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Carol, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 1:06:00 PM

    wow!!superb write my friend Anne Lise...I like your poem...thanks for sharing before i sleep..(^_^) oh wish it raining here....hugs!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/20/2012 1:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Maria, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/19/2012 10:13:00 PM

    Why? Thank you, Anne-Lise for the rose. So special. I can just imagine what the roses look like with rain drops on them. Beautiful. Love roses. Love you, Toquyen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/20/2012 4:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Toquyen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/19/2012 5:42:00 PM

    nice Anne Lise,,,,, always like reading your poems XOXO's

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/20/2012 4:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And I'm always glad for your visit and comments Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/19/2012 12:53:00 PM

    Anne Lise; this is very beautiful. I can just picture the rose bush with so many rain drops. Thanks for sharing and also for being so nice. Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/19/2012 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lucilla, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/18/2012 11:37:00 AM

    Beautiful poem. I'm surprised I haven't read this or commented on this before. Excellent work.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/18/2012 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jon, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/16/2012 11:33:00 PM

    Pearls that cannot be picked need to be enjoyed in the moment. These visions you paint with words are to be treasured also. Well done dear. Chuck

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/17/2012 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Chuck, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/16/2012 5:09:00 PM

    You isolated a moment and turned it into powerful imagery! I can see each and every drop of dew and the veins of the spider web too! I love this....wow! gwendolen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/17/2012 11:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gwen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/14/2012 6:59:00 AM

    A roes is a poem that people grow.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/14/2012 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    John, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2012 3:27:00 PM

    You paint autumn with such beauty, the season was never decorated quite this way before!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/14/2012 1:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Elizabeth, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2012 3:15:00 PM

    Beautiful, sensitive writing, dear Anne Lisa. I just heard a few drops hit my dining room window, which added to your fine poem. Love, daver

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/14/2012 1:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Daver, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise ;)
  1. Date: 9/13/2012 9:59:00 AM

    I love this Anne Lise! Your description of the raindrops falling on the rose bush and on the spider web serves to remind us that some things are truly a universal gift. Nice!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/13/2012 10:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Vicky, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2012 9:13:00 AM

    pearly greetings on this lovely thursday moment, anne.. huggles to you!..:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/13/2012 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nette, thank you for visit - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2012 8:57:00 AM

    What a lovely poem my dear friend! I have enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you also for taking your time in reading mine. Have a blessed and grace-filled day always!!! luv and hugs:) leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/13/2012 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Leonora, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2012 7:10:00 AM

    Very beautiful work....thanks for checking out my poetry.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/13/2012 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Doris, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 3:10:00 PM

    you get the real man from a place called heaven lol. there all angels from that place ;) loved the write :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 3:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Elizabeth, thank you for visit and comment my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 12:12:00 PM

    *.* Wow, First I Must Say That After Scrolling The Beautiful Commenteers List Here, My Dear Sweet Beautiful AnneLise, Tis Just That, Adorned As A Holiday's Tree In Glittering Splendours ~ Thus I Find This Your Priceless Heart's Beautiful Poem Quite Fitting Unto The Entire Scene At Least In Regards Unto This, 'The Beauty' ~ Thus Again, I Find Much More Here Than A Mere, Two Roses Beautiful Lady ~ An Entire Bouquet With A Box Of Chocolates & A Crystal Glass Bubbling In Love ~ My Love, Tristen *

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tristen, thank you for visit and sweet comments on my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 10:39:00 AM

    roses are beautiful. A beautiful expressed poem.I enjioyed reding it. God bless you. Hugs! Erich

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 10:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Erich, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:25:00 AM

    wow, anne...your images come together, like a sweet song...i am totally enthralled by the delicate beauty of your images-- the raindrops falling on rose bushes and all... your are wonderful flower; a sure favorite for me... enchanting!... happy day!..:) huggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 10:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nette, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:15:00 AM

    I love the beauty in this poem...I found it odd thou??? Because for one...We have a rose bush with 2 roses on it also? One full one,and one smaller one just blooming? And the second....Sometime back I was walking past it,and stopped to look at it after a rain.Woudn't you know? Same thoughts? That is to cute...I love the poem. :o) oxox

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 10:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The same thought and idea .... - thank you my f.e.f. for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:13:00 AM

    This is a beautiful visual write. One of my favorite. Amazing Imagry.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 10:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jay, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 8:40:00 AM

    I like how you always see the positive - I bet that pop of color is beautiful :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    B.E.S. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 7:18:00 AM

    Hi Anne Lise very good write here my friend, lovley images of the rose bush, all the best Owen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 10:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Owen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:39:00 AM

    Lovely just one fly in the ointment for me ... spider web, that mean spider. lovely verse though well done and thanks for xx all you up building comments

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it's probably a spider and two too .... lol .. Thank you for visiting my poem, and left a comments. xoxo love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 5:58:00 AM

    Lovely imagery with the scent of the rose for the mind to meld with. A truly beautiful write Anne Lise. For me, the rain creates a crystal palace. Mahalo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Connie, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 4:00:00 AM

    I enjoyed the metaphor at the beginning of this poem, I could visulise the picture you painted with your words.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2012 4:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anthony, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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