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If I didn't think what I think

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If I didn't think what I think

If I didn't think what I think, I’d think what I don’t
Would I laugh while you cry? Would I enjoy if you moaned?

If I didn't think what I think, I’d be a gangster by now
I’d never pay any bills, I’d hack the system somehow

If I didn't think what I think, I‘d have no respect for boys
I wouldn’t appreciate the good ones, just use them like toys

If I didn't think what I think, I would be studying at this moment
I have my exam tomorrow, I just hope I don’t repent
Spending all my time on PS, making poems all the time
Cuz that’s what I enjoy doing most, I’m having my time!….

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  1. Date: 9/15/2012 2:32:00 PM
    lovely write, my friend - yes, I know how addictive Soup is, lol

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 10:45:00 PM
    excellent apoorva with some tremendous lines luv .. I like the part of the gangster and paying no bills .. classic ..u made it your own .. much success luv..

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 12:36:00 PM
    nicely penned ...enjoyed...best wishes in the contest

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 7:11:00 AM
    sounds like a plan to me.....what fun that would be!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 10:59:00 PM
    I hope you did well in your exam and time spent here was not an hinderance. Thanks for reading me. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:01:00 PM
    GREAT fun you had with this one and I am loving it too!!!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 1:00:00 PM
    Very interesting thoughts here. Loved it thoroughly - keep up the excellent work. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 11:32:00 AM
    Hi Apoorva ..I loved this one ..there's so much a student can relate to . Loved the line-- I just hope I don't repent :D

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 8:45:00 AM
    I really like your 2nd and 3rd stanzas - great ideas! good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 9:18:00 AM
    A poem about what life's all about for you dear apoorva, wonderfully written, brings cultures so much closer together............

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 3:58:00 PM
    hahahah...the distracted student who should have just majored in poetry...right?...Fun and transparent write. Enjoyed. ") gwendolen