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  1. Date: 9/20/2012 12:18:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 6:05:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem and win. I wish you heard cries of world peace, I hear those cries are echoing way back in the distance right now. Well done. Lee

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 1:42:00 AM

    Hey Yas, congrats dear!

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 3:31:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 1:23:00 PM

    A wall with an attitude...love it! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:42:00 AM

    Very interesting. You covered a lot of territory with your entry. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 8:09:00 AM

    MANY CONGRATS YASMIN ON A BRILLIANT BEAUTY WRITE AND WIN LUV .. VERY EXPRESSIVE .. MOST IMPRESSIVE TO ABSORB ..

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 9:13:00 PM

    Yours had to be one of the cleverest of them all on the list. Congrats on your win. This was one of my favorites.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 7:55:00 PM

    My hearty congratulations on your win, Yasmin!! :) hugs Leonora

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 6:26:00 PM

    Great write Yasmin..congrats for this well deserved win! One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 6:16:00 PM

    Very clever my Yassie! Loved how it's so modern too and its ending [check your it's...make sure you have the ' in where they need to be ;)..line 4?] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 12:26:00 PM

    well done, mareey.. congrats on your greeat win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Congrats Yasmin on your win in the contest!Loved it!

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your #3 win in my contest! I liked how your walls would be tattle tales - such fun :)

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:28:00 AM

    Congratulations Yasmin on your terrific win here well done xx

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:26:00 AM

    YASMIN, congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 9:47:00 AM

    congrats on your win Yasmin

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 12:02:00 AM

    Ears without sense are conduits for false judgements - they say Deity gave us 'two ears and one mouth for a reason', but ears untuned to truth and honesty can be perpetrators of effronting beliefs that can damage good souls - Walls give privacy but also confinement - good work Yasmin! J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 7:07:00 AM

    Don't you dare, how could you think of such a thing. More than me would be heartbroken soive it some time and let the hurt heal. You are part of all of us! el5zz@yahoo.com if you need me! :)

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 5:55:00 AM

    Lots of nasty stuff going on here Yassie, it sounds like you're hitting pretty hard on yourself but I'm here to tell you it was all a bad dream. Great poem for the contest with best wishes little girl! Hugs, Lizzie

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:24:00 PM

    You sure bro't the wall to life and gave it a sensitivity that many humans lack! Integrating the modern ways of communication and the upbeat rhyme makes this one truly stand out, gal! Two thumbs up for this one!!! gwendolen :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 4:50:00 AM

    Awesome, how you pulled off this concept with such a unique write. Applause Yassie...and good luck.

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 9:28:00 PM

    Wow, you did amazing with this. It's one of the best I Have read, for real, yasmin. I think you were so creative here. I can't even come up with a cool idea yet. Hopefully before the contest ends!!! Luv ya, Andrea (glad you were wishing for footles)

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 5:31:00 PM

    An excellent write, Yasmin! The world could do without the walls that segregate and keep us from understanding one another. Best wishes in Susan's contest. Hugs across the miles, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 3:21:00 PM

    great write Yasmin,best of luck

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 1:47:00 PM

    your mindset these days has been on keen observation about privacy , mareey...here is a good example of it ; so well written and very pensive at that.. i like!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 9:25:00 AM

    this is a wonderful cleverly written poem, yasmin. just love this, good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:52:00 AM

    Wow, what an interesting and awesome write my friend! Yes walls tend to only have ears that hear everything that goes on, no eyes that can see us, and no mouth to tell on us! Even though the walls can seem comforting, the world might do better without them! You said it best in your last two lines Yasmin! This is a wonderful poem, terrific piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:35:00 AM

    An excellent takeon the contest theme Yasmin!Love this poem!Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:31:00 AM

    Yeah I am first here Yas!!