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Seeking the Sun

His voice is the same voice
when I hear you
I taste a song of time
Why do not you listen to me?
Why?
Return to me
in the form of a bird
I listen to your voice
in time, in space, at infinity ..
his voice, my voice ..
Just to tell you
I love you, ...
I love you, ...
I love you, ...
back to me!
The memory will bring you
to me from another dimension
do, re, mi, fa, sol, la, si, do, ...
I will find the musical note
to bring you back to me
I'll build a spaceship
to get you on Mars
a potent submarine
to plumb the depths of the ocean
and rescue his soul
Just to tell you
I love you.

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  1. Date: 11/22/2012 5:19:00 PM

    Max, congratulation with your featured poem of the week. God Bless, you and your family during the holidays,, always~ PD

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 12:07:00 AM

    ah..lovely write..enjoyed it Max thanks for sharing :)) SK

    Diniz Cruzeiro Avatar Max Diniz Cruzeiro Date: 9/14/2012 4:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate your sensitivity, because in reality the reader's eyes are what express emotions.
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:05:00 AM

    great depth to express your love,great write Max,you asked for wisdom and expression,check out my poem Wisdom and Understanding,hope it helps

    Diniz Cruzeiro Avatar Max Diniz Cruzeiro Date: 9/12/2012 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for being part of my conscious. His friend Max