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First Cuppa Jo or Wired and Inspired

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First Cuppa Jo or Wired and Inspired

What a deal I got!
A new brand of coffee
at the Good Deal Hut.
I’d say it cost about thirty percent less;
That’s as good as it gets, I guess….

Just poured myself a big ole morning cup,
A nice big steaming mug,
Both hands.. hold and sip as I tip it up..

Ppptttui!.. Of all the stinking luck!
They shoulda  named it Mr Yuk!
But.. but… what a deal I got !




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  1. Date: 10/15/2012 9:27:00 AM

    ha! mr yuk! I love your descriptions and that last line, how you try to cheer yourself up with the 30 cents you saved - entertaining write :)

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 8:56:00 AM

    The deal was real and maybe a steal but the taste was a waste cause you dealt in haste. How's that for an answer. I'll give you a sip of mine, it hardly has any flavor so which is worse? :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:26:00 PM

    Robert, wow... I see you did not like the brand new coffee.. I like the way you spoke with your opinion open wide.. mr.yuk.. sure fits with your ending image..xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 10:09:00 AM

    ha! i think we've all succumbed to a "great deal" that turns out to be not quite as good as what we'd expected it to be. you've described it well.

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 9:58:00 AM

    Wow Robert this is different, and so enjoyable to read, 'One get what one pays for' so they say.........