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Autumn

Autumn is here. When I think of autumn, I think of the beautiful colors, that God used to paint the landscape. I see green,yellow,orange, brown and red. Everytime that I take a ride in the country site, or go up on the mountains, or forest preserves. Come with me, lets go for a ride. Lets you and I explore the sites. We will enjoy the beauty of Mother Nature. It is free for you and me. We will watch how the leaves fall from the trees. They will come by the thousands and fall everywhere, while the wind plays a beautiful song. All the leaves will dance until they drop, in the sunlight and shine of the moon. They will form a carpet of beautiful colors, so that we can enjoy each autumn...
09/10/2012 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo This is for Russell Sivey's contest

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  1. Date: 9/24/2012 3:49:00 PM

    good write here, good luck in the contest. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 10:43:00 AM

    Congratulations on your very well deserved win in Russell's "Autumn Splendor" contest Lucilla. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 7:10:00 AM

    LUCILLA Congrats with your win ~SKAT

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:03:00 AM

    DAnce until they drop!! Oh my that is so cool to put that line into a poem. It's such a common expression but I don't think I have ever seen it cleverly inserted into a fall poem before!! Congrats on your win with this pretty poem.

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 11:46:00 PM

    Lucilla.. congratulations with your awesome imagery in Russell Sivey's " Autumn Splendor " beautiful contest. Always nice to support all contest when possible~ Good night :-* PD

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 9:10:00 PM

    CONGRATS LUCILLA ON A LOVELY WRITE AND WIN LUV ..IMPRESSIVE ..

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 2:22:00 PM

    Beautifully said Lucilla. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 6:46:00 AM

    love your autumn journey Lucilla,

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 4:07:00 PM

    OMG! What a nice penned piece! It's really marvellous. This is the best part for me: 'They will form a carpet of beautiful colors' I imagine that carpet full of colors of nature made by God. Thank you for sharing. Love, Khalid.

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 9:03:00 PM

    I think Russell is going to thoroughly enjoy this captivating description of lovely autumn. It's so nice to see two new poems from you when I come here tonight!

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 11:14:00 PM

    Nice descriptive write, Lucilla. Just one thing: in your first verse, you have ended a sentence with the preposition "with". It is considered improper grammar to end a sentence with a preposition. Just a suggestion: how about changing that line to, "When I think of autumn (use lower case a, "autumn" is not considered a proper noun), I think of the beautiful colors that God has used to paint the landscape"?

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 10:10:00 PM

    An autumn tour, how lovely! Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:21:00 PM

    Lucilla, I strife for a beautiful Autumn down here in Texas.. I love the lovely image you wrote about. God is a wonderful artist. And nature helps with all the lovely colors we can enjoy..xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:46:00 AM

    You paint a lovely picture for this time of year LUcilla, I hope you are wearing your red hat, have a blessed day, love vie

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:23:00 AM

    Beautiful poem, Lucilla. I hope you win. Autumn is usually so short. It truly is a gorgeous season. Love ya, Toquyen