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Silent The Castle Doors

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Silent The Castle Doors

Stillness held the flower, in distant gazes spilling from their palms....

A cats meow, resounding atop timeless rafters; peering at the stage

About a sixteenth century romance; dramatica, close the castle door

Hush the crowd betwixt breath they keep; frozen amid this their heart

As Juliet lifts her tearful blade and Romeo's love, now fast asleep; dreams

Not weep as time does part to gather once more; aneath these stars....

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...."Silent, the Castle Doors" * 

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  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:53:00 AM
    a beautiful, profound poem

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:01:00 PM
    Another lovely verse filled with the genius of your mind and pen... Cynthia Singing Still

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 2:22:00 PM
    truly creative masterpiece... a tragic love story.. but as they say "anyone can hate, it costs to love..." love has its sacrifices.. but it is for you to make it all the way... Love Mohini.. ;)

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 8:27:00 PM
    very nicely worded in this tragic love story,,,, have a great day tristen ;}

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 4:40:00 PM
    an exquisite portrait of the star crossed lovers tragic tale of love tristen luv .. a rare beauty ..