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Like A Folded Rose

I am incredibility inner today, like a folded rose, metaphorically speaking I am totally dwelling within . . . the world moving outside of me lost within my own reverie I have come to the art gallery where I can lose myself on the patio I am reading and writing the warm sun is caressing me the breeze stroking me silence embraces my body I am safe within my loneliness the world is far away Until . . . some people arrive, noisily clinking of forks and stench of food slurping noises . . . the stillness, peacefulness a thing of the past my refuge has been destroyed I want to run in my disgust Now, lost within the world of Old Masters I roam the corridors of the gallery, alone and I dwell within the folded rose . . . Written September 8, 2012 For the contest, Metaphorically Speaking Sponsored by, Catie Lindsey

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  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:13:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Constance. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 8:32:00 AM

    So beautiful!!! Congratulations on your win, Constance!!! hugs:)

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 8:56:00 PM

    Beautifully written Constance. Congratulations on your HM. I can certainly relate to this one. I would think many poets will.

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 8:06:00 PM

    Constance, congrats on your Honorable Mention! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 10:10:00 AM

    A beautiful poem. I am beginning to understand the metaphor better from reading yours.

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:39:00 AM

    Cnstnace :-). Congratulations with your awesome win in Catie's "Metaphorically Speaking" contest. Have yourself a nice day~ LUV*PD

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 8:52:00 AM

    Congratulations, Constance, on your win in my contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 10:40:00 PM

    an outstanding entry full of lovely connotations of metaphors Constance .. the rose parallel to u luv is so sweetly portrayed with beautiful essence of persona .. best wishes my friend luv

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 8:59:00 AM

    Just beautiful..BG

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 4:00:00 PM

    and i 'Metaphorically Speaking' love this awesome free verse, one get a sense of actually being there, when reading this,

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:33:00 PM

    An awesome write Constance...best wishes in the contest. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:17:00 PM

    lovely write, Constance - so good to see you here : )

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:06:00 PM

    What a fabulous write my friend! I really enjoyed the creativity you exuded within this incredible poem! You have written a very delightful and a very special write Constance! I love this extraordinary piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 11:37:00 AM

    Amazing poetry by you Constance!Love this!

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 11:27:00 AM

    This rose requires little care today, beautifully written Constance! Luck in contest. Have a peaceful weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)