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I Made A Promise

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I Made A Promise

Lukng @ u ryt now
I made a prmsing vow

I wnt u so much n my lyf
2 myk my drms so bryt

I wil hold u n my arms so tyt
Luv me wid ol of ur heart 2nyt



Translation:

Looking at you right now
I made a promising vow

I want you so much in my life
To make my dreams so bright

I will hold you in my arms so tight
Love me with all of your heart tonight


For David's Contest
6th place Winner

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  1. Date: 10/10/2012 9:28:00 PM
    MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY DEAR FRIEND! I AM SO PROUD OF YOU!! LOVE LEONORA. Please join my contest.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks dear friend Norie..ok I will and I will try my best :)
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 7:48:00 PM
    congrats on your win Maria

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Joseph ;)
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 4:20:00 PM
    a cute little romantic one. BIG congrats.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Andrea, big big congrats to you too for winning 1st place...yahoo!! :)
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:45:00 PM
    It melts the texting heart!!! Nicely done!!!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Carrie :) have a nice day!
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:43:00 PM
    Wow! A romantic texting! Very nice, Maria! Congrats on your win! Ruben.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Ruben..hugs!
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:25:00 PM
    Congrats on a great win Maria, in Text talk contest!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Yesha..good day! :)
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 9:26:00 AM
    MARIA, Congratulations, in David's awesome "text talking" contest... always~pd

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much lovable PD :)
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 9:15:00 AM
    WAY TO GO MARIA .. CONGRATS ON ANOTHER GREAT WIN LUV ..

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Linda_Marie, congrats to you too cheers to us!
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 6:13:00 AM
    Short BUT SWEET! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/11/2012 12:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Debbie :)
  1. Date: 10/10/2012 5:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in David's "TEXT TALK" contest Maria. Love, Carol

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/10/2012 11:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks dear carol and thank you so much for placing me in your contest...take care always!
  1. Date: 9/14/2012 7:51:00 PM
    what a sweet text message. I wish you well in the contest with it.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 10/10/2012 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Andrea :)
  1. Date: 9/9/2012 1:13:00 AM
    Oh my!! So romantic and beautiful poem my dear moving me into a dream or fantasy. Congratulations and my BEST WISHES AND LUCK ALWAYS BOTH ON YOUR LOVE LIFE AND MANY BIG WINS!! LUV YAH ALWAYS,

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/9/2012 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    many thanks to you for your unending support..mwauh!! luv you always!!
  1. Date: 9/8/2012 3:58:00 AM
    Beautiful Maria - a romantic - message Have a nice weekend. -xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/8/2012 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend anne Lise...have a blessed weekend too :) hugss!!