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Adrift

I don't know what I know
I can't feel what I feel
With my head spinin' round and round.
I'm a boat adrift
On a crystal clear ocean,
Without course, without wind, without sound.
Can't you see that your love
Is my wind and my rudder
And my strength to get where
I am bound...

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  1. Date: 9/8/2012 3:12:00 PM

    Nice ~Skat

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  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:01:00 AM

    wow, this is a very nice poem, Craig. And thanks for your remarks on my Life is a Dance.

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 3:38:00 PM

    charming me no end, craig... your choice of words are beautiful, especially your last four lines which end your piece with a nice finishing touch...:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 6:54:00 AM

    My weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here Craig. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. Love, Carol