Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership
Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

Udacha - to luck

jim joyce Avatar jim joyce - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Udacha - to luck which was written by poet jim joyce. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by jim joyce

Best Jim Joyce Poems

+ Fav Poet

Udacha - to luck

Like the  gentle oak she stands strong  and slender, straight and sleek 
she will not bend nor break nor is she meek
Magnificent , mysterious ,wild and free 
because her fruit falls close , her offspring stands pretty as she 
 Softly glowing eyes ablaze in a fire of blue, 
Piercing ,teasing ,hypnotic and alluring 
A haunting beauty ,She stands tall in starry fields of lonely winter nights
While The pale moon sets against a velvet carpet of purple and white
Brown hair setting aflame the golden dawn of the oak after the long night 
She calls and I listen , all I need is a little luck and I will find 
Lost  amidst all the Russian passion and beauty ,a diamond among the rough 
For any man to find such a friend is more than enough 

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:17:00 AM
    Very well penned piece of intense poetry. Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 4:40:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this creative and descriptive work..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara