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harry horsman
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Do fools fall in love... daddy don’t you walk so fast, don’t blame it on me © Harry J Horsman
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Linda Barr
Date: 9/16/2012 11:50:00 PM
It depends upon the fool. Some never learn. Lol. In answer to your question about love. No, I have never experienced that forever kind of love, but my folks have.
bulinya martins
Date: 9/10/2012 2:06:00 AM
you are wordsmith. With few words you mold a powerful poem. Have a good day
karen croft
Date: 9/7/2012 5:42:00 PM
interesting! i wanted to let you know i forgot my garage sale list on my poem so i edited it
apoorva patrikar
Date: 9/7/2012 11:17:00 AM
so much in so little words! u r talented harry! very talented
George Aul
Date: 9/7/2012 9:54:00 AM
Thought provoking poem......... George
Wilma Neels
Date: 9/7/2012 7:41:00 AM
Great opening line Harry, so much to ponder on in your three lines :) love Wilma
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 9/6/2012 6:41:00 PM
it is also sweet fate that insisted I return to PS and continue growing all my special friendships with my favorite friends so special like u luv .. thankxxx for lovely words my dear friend..
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 9/6/2012 6:37:00 PM
amazing piece harry luv as it relates to in depth thinking .. and songs of long ago so great too ..
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/6/2012 3:58:00 PM
a senryu with much to say, Harry. I am glad to see this new post of yours today!
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 9/6/2012 2:09:00 PM
Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your outstanding poetry with us Harry. I enjoyed reading your poetry very much today. Love, Carol
jack horne
Date: 9/6/2012 1:50:00 PM
love this witty senryu, Harry
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2012 10:51:00 AM
Love it Harry. - (do not blame me) - Have a nice Thursday. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/6/2012 10:48:00 AM
Sounds like you have been listening to music.Love all the comments and we could do a duet. Had me chuckling with my morning coffee. Have a nice day. love phyl
Arild Andresen Ertsland
Date: 9/6/2012 10:32:00 AM
Splendid senryu,Harry.You gave me something to ponder about here!
bl devnath
Date: 9/6/2012 10:00:00 AM
Everyone does, no chance to blame. Wonderful Senryu beautifully done. Thanks for your comment on my write. My friend, bl always with you.
Erich Goller
Date: 9/6/2012 9:47:00 AM
That's a very nice expressed Senryu, Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Erich
Cynthia Alvez
Date: 9/6/2012 9:38:00 AM
Life calling! Nice...had to think about it for a minute. Cynthia
Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/6/2012 9:02:00 AM
Is this that the fool did not fall in love and is now leaving on a jet plane?..The child crying in the wake of the explosion or hurt and angry feelings?...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Russell Sivey
Date: 9/6/2012 8:32:00 AM
I really enjoyed this incredible write of yours Harry! Daddy doesn't seem to like you fools falling in love does he? Why not blame it on you, ha ha, sure you had nothing to do with it! What a wonderful poem, great piece, Awesome Work!!
yasmin khan
Date: 9/6/2012 8:26:00 AM
good senryu...HH...RR..Harry Horsman..Robert Redford!
Doris Culverhouse
Date: 9/6/2012 6:57:00 AM
enjolyed....I can't see the connection though....what is blamed??
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/6/2012 6:56:00 AM
I think the answer is a big fat yes, great Senryu. xx