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Subdued

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Subdued

Your very presence takes my breath away
Your light banter makes my smile sway,
Intricately woven, our paths cross oft
Unbeknown, are we soul mates adrift?
Slowly time will tell its tale
Spinning away removing all veils . . .

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  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:20:00 AM
    I like the lightness in this poem, it like the words keep floating even after they are read.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:57:00 PM
    Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your wonderful poetry with us Fathima. I enjoyed reading your poetry very much today. Love, Carol