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Dainty Breeze

gently it lingers
the smell of lavendar drifts
soft winds wisp about
Written for the "Autumn Splendor" contest of Russell Sivey Written on 09/05/2012 by "Carol Brown" 2nd Place Winner

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  1. Date: 3/29/2013 6:39:00 AM

    so nice and full of images that stick to the mind, nice work

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:27:00 PM

    about your haiku.... Congratulations ..love the soft look..pd

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:26:00 PM

    I know we all love you...but,,, I wuv you more... as a friend... and I only look up too you... others I only have great respect...pd

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:25:00 PM

    Carol, please tell me what is wrong...pd

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:03:00 AM

    love this Haiku verse Carol. I love lavender?

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 8:53:00 PM

    i can almost smell this...well done haiku :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 7:45:00 PM

    Hi Carol it is very nice leaving you a comemnt. I miss commenting your poems. I'm always here on the down low. congrats on your win. sending you soup-mail. SIDDY

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Absolutely gorgeous! JL

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 4:12:00 PM

    I love to walk a field of lavender! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 10:04:00 AM

    Thank you all so much. Your words are truly appreciated. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 6:16:00 AM

    Lovely words, a very pleasing read.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 7:03:00 AM

    CAROL Congrats with your win ~SKAT

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 3:33:00 PM

    CONGRATS SUNSHINE OH HOW PERFECTLY FITTING FOR U CAROL ON A FABULOUS WRITE AND WIN DEPICTING AUTUMN LOVELINESS .. LUV ..

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 9:49:00 AM

    Hey, there it is again, that lovely lavender image. Congratulations, Carol and I love you are calling yourself sunshine now!!

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 11:41:00 PM

    Carol.. congratulations with your awesome imagery in Russell Sivey's " Autumn Splendor " beautiful contest. Always nice to support all contest when possible~ Good night :-* PD

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 11:10:00 AM

    congrads on your win dear Miss Sunshine...

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 3:14:00 PM

    very nice haiku Carol...good luck in the contest..love...Joseph

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 1:14:00 PM

    i like alot you inspierd me in past with my winter blues poem and the seasons I love you capture the element beautafuly xx davidscott

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 9:37:00 AM

    Just beautiful Carol!!Love this haiku!

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 6:59:00 AM

    i love this beautiful felling here love duncan and ceizar xxx

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 6:38:00 AM

    oh, and I see this one was posted on my birthday. you did a GREAT post on my day, Carol. I love lavendar, the smell and look of it. Love this.

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 5:48:00 AM

    Wishing you well as regards the contest of Russell Carol, I think this is a relaxing piece a good one for the mind to enjoy.."

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 4:43:00 AM

    I can feel the soft cool breeze blended with the smell of lavender as it reached even from US to India and enchanted by its magic I also wrote a Poem on 'The magic of September Wind' What a beautiful aroma you have sketched Carol that it has reached even to me. Great and beautiful write, My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you for your always kind comments. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Carol Brown

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 12:54:00 PM

    I am not much for Haiku poetry, because I don't like to count syllables, but this was well-done. I love autumn. The syllable count in this piece was good. This is an excellent nature Haiku.

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Wow...wt imagery....catches the mood...xx...Irfana

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 12:50:00 AM

    This is a splendid Haiku, Carol. Congratulations for a great write. Thank you so much for reading my recent poems. Good luck always!! luv leonora

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:48:00 PM

    ....*.* Ps., A Beautiful Favourite Set In 'Autumn's Splendour" ~

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:44:00 PM

    *.* There You Are, Whispering Softly Your Beauty In Gentle Hues Of Loveliness, My Precious Beautiful Carol Brown ~ Whenever I Find Myself Cast Into Such Gentle Pleasantry As This Soothing Scene ~ I Consider The Movie, 'Legend,' With Tom Cruise & His Beautiful Little Tinker Bell '*.*' I Say That Your Beauty Print This Upon Fragrant Pastel & Thank You, For Your Priceless Visit ~ Love Lavender ~ My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 2:52:00 PM

    Beautiful Carol! Refects the moods of autumn. A very nice job! I feel autumn around the corner.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:38:00 PM

    Really Nice piece! It took my breath away. I think the syllables count 6/6/5 rather than 5/7/5 if I'm not mistaken. But eventhough this is brilliant work. hugs. Khalid

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