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Pain

Pain is a terrible thing,
a bad emotion.
It makes you insane,
sometimes uncontrollable.
Pain is from brothers,
whose mother caters,
their every whim.
Pain is from fathers,
who do not trust,
their teenaged daughters.
Pain is from mothers,
who set too high standards,
who discourage you in everything,
that you try to do.
They don't believe you,
they don't trust you,
in anything that you do.
It is a shame,
the relationships between,
mothers and daughters,
dwindle away,
never seeming to be getting better.
No matter how much the daughter tries,
the mother looks for faults in everything.
It is really a shame,
because relationships,
between father and daughter,
are more prominent,
In these modern days.
             xxx

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  1. Date: 9/8/2012 7:23:00 AM
    Wish there was no pain or sorrow. Very good written poem - I like it! Have a peaceful weekend. - Xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 10:20:00 AM
    THIS IS A GOOD POEM

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 11:30:00 PM
    Yes, that is really bad, the pain coming from family when that should be the safe place for us all!