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The victim

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The victim

                                           He was her friend.
                                         Her close companion.
                               Then came the turbulent emotions
                                       causing a blur of motion.
                                    Ruthlessly battering borders
                                 Shattering all interfering barriers.
                              In shock of the unspeakable betrayal
                             she stood rooted in a capitulate state –
                                       a chick with the hawk.
                              Psychologically bruised into resignation
                                  Awakening to the reality with a
                                          deep hatred of self.
                              Creating a post conceived abhorrence
                                      of that day when she was
                                    brutalized by circumstances.

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  1. Date: 11/6/2012 9:04:00 AM

    I'm all about poems that express raw emotion, I love this. The phrase psychologically bruised– that is perfectly worded. Brutalized by circumstances is a good way to end this poem. I love the use of imagery to portray such raw emotion, this is marvelous!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:05:00 PM

    Well done Vicky, very good poem.

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 10:17:00 AM

    i like your usage of words. very well done.

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 4:33:00 AM

    This is very moving and real. To be left with self-hatred after something so awful happens. If this autobiographical I certainly hope you have moved on, into a sense of peace and love. Wonderful job.

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 11:02:00 PM

    Vicky,, Congratulations in Debbie's " Let's Get Serious " awesome contest. ~ :-) always a pleasure in reading all winners when I get the chance. super xox's from~ PD

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 7:15:00 PM

    Very sad, it must be difficult to write a poem like this , warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 6:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in this contest "Let's Get Serious" Vicky. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 2:32:00 PM

    No one likes to assume the worst about someone..and being hurt by a person called friend is the worst! I hope you are OK? Congrad's on your Serious verse winning. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 9:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your big win Vicky xx

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 11:45:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win with this very powerful poetry , vicky

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 9:19:00 PM

    Very sad poem. Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 6:10:00 PM

    A sad state to be in. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:35:00 AM

    Wow Vicky this is powerful, so full of emotion, 'A Chick with the Hawk' i'm going to place this in my favourite poems alomng with you. awesome just awesome.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 4:54:00 AM

    Excellent!!

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 4:46:00 PM

    Awww wow! This was great.. . Very dark and so true. I feel bad for those who ar scarred by the cruelty of man and such things. Great poem!!! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 9:36:00 AM

    Oooo... powerful poem! Terry (& thanks for your kind comments)

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 2:58:00 AM

    Vicky, a very good poem. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)