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Our World

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Our World

In a place full of technicalities,
And immorality,
Many search for financial immortality,

Few fight feelings of gravity,
Unable to agree with reality,
Another casualty, accepted casually,
Blind faith of causality?

Bad or good,
Yet not so simple,
Sword of shield,
Choice is instrumental,

Black and white, are details,
On track, not derailed,
Subliminal messages make things seem,
But where's the grey area in between?

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  1. Date: 9/10/2012 2:00:00 AM
    Nice write! Very insightful!

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 11:34:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Alex. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 6:41:00 PM
    A good poem and message.