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About This Poem

WANING OF TIME



Her beauty wanes with elder moon’s timed curves, appalled

Empty is she,once adored like porcelain doll



For Susan's Time Contest

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  1. Bagnall Avatar
    Nick Bagnall
    Date: 9/18/2012 5:53:00 AM
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    Congrats, a very interesting poem, lots to think about here.
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    Lee Ramage
    Date: 9/8/2012 10:30:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 9/6/2012 3:11:00 PM
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    Poignant and descriptive. BIG congrats, Nette.
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    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 9/6/2012 2:54:00 PM
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    Sad but sometimes true for those who put all their self worth in their exterior. An excellent write as always, Nette! Belated congrats...hugs, Rhonda
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    DEBRA FALGOUT
    Date: 9/5/2012 8:08:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win nette, love debra
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 9/5/2012 7:22:00 PM
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    Nette, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 9/5/2012 5:23:00 PM
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    Nette, congrats on your 2nd place win with this lovely couplet! Love, Kim
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    Cynthia Alvez
    Date: 9/5/2012 4:12:00 PM
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    Hats off to you Nette! Outstanding! Cynthia
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 9/5/2012 6:54:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 9/4/2012 5:38:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win Nette,,, xox~PD
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    olusegun Arowolo
    Date: 9/4/2012 5:04:00 PM
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    Splendid and nice piece,Nette.Congratulations on your super win..
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    Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 9/4/2012 11:13:00 AM
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    Nice one Nette! Congrats on your win!
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/4/2012 8:31:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your smashing win nette xx
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 9/4/2012 8:21:00 AM
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    congratulations dear Priya,another win to celebrate,happy week to you..
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 9/4/2012 3:43:00 AM
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    This is a top notch entry, Nette! The changes that time brings with itself wear in slowly.
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    harry horsman
    Date: 9/3/2012 8:18:00 AM
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    Time is it the enemy or our friend? guess Time will tell. enjoyed this nette,
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 9/2/2012 12:46:00 PM
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    Sad realization that we as humans have to face isn't it..If one doesn't develope inner beauty, one is just last when the beauty fades and the wrinkles show up..Great work with great truth..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the stopping by...Sara
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    kash poet
    Date: 9/2/2012 12:27:00 PM
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    Wow, a great couplet here nette!love this!
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    Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/2/2012 11:10:00 AM
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    Big write...A big win I believe. Thanks for your kind comments Nette...one blessed love! Joy Wells
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 9/2/2012 9:39:00 AM
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    This is an elaborately constructed write, pieced together with forethought and much insight, I hope you don't feel this way my friend! You do see deep into things and are quite good and deducing the truth behind many hidden aspects of life! Even if they are so grandiose in feelings such as this, a flood of emotions can come from this poem of yours Nette! You are the master of such poetry, you write with great emotion in your writes, so filled with awe am I at times, bewildered with inspiration!

    Sivey Avatar Russell Sivey Date: 9/2/2012 9:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are the master of verse my friend! Great Work!!
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 9/2/2012 9:02:00 AM
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    well all can relate to these exquisite line Nette luv .. the mirror is removed as time goes by so as not to be reminded .. good luck luv .. all well with that Tsunami warning on your shores?
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/2/2012 5:03:00 AM
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    Lovely Nette. Another contest .... and you are ready ..... to conjure up beautiful poem .... lol - Have a beautiful Sunday. oxox love from Norway.
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    Cindy Cayton
    Date: 9/2/2012 3:50:00 AM
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    This stirred me, very eloquent. Thank you for your very generous comment, always appreciated. Much Love, Cindy Lu


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