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Lost Until Found

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Lost Until Found

                                                                Lost
                                                               in life
                                                          with not one
                                                     remembered dream
                                  only shattered daydeams that lead to scars...
                                                               Found
                                                             confused
                                                         as love picked
                                                        up a heart and
                                 brought dreams in color with hope and desire...

                                                                   M
                                                                    J
                                                                    F

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  1. Date: 11/18/2012 10:09:00 AM
    aww cute

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 11:03:00 AM
    Nicely done on this poem and love the shape and the unique ending with your initials. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 10:30:00 AM
    This is so cool, MJ! I love the message it brings and the way you formatted it, even your initials going down at the end. You are a distinct talent! Good to see a new poem from you.

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 10:10:00 AM
    A contrasting but complementary pair: the one dark and hopeless, the other pleasant and optimistic. Nicely done, Michael. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 9:35:00 AM
    GREAT poetry my brother!! Oh yes,all those shattered dreams left behind somewhere in the past.I`m so happy my little angel came along and brought me back on track again:) Outstanding write,Michael! Always,Arild

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 8:51:00 AM
    thankxxx Michael luv for my 2nd place win .. so honored to be among so many wonderful winners .. I am always excited about your themes and writing for u gives your JG great pleasure .. returning luv and hugs ..xoxo

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 7:16:00 AM
    I have no idea, they are looking at the computer screen while I am typing this comment :) lol

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 7:10:00 AM
    The best part of being found is having that safe haven. Enjoyed this beauty by you today.. Now why would you not like my new avatar? :( I think it looks cute :D luv CTH

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 6:31:00 AM
    In all honesty, Michael, I've been one of the lucky ones with a life free of too many downs and a whole big bunch of ups! Just one of the lucky ones, I guess! A good write... Jack

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 7:04:00 PM
    ONE SPECIAL LUV CAN MEND ALL THOSE BROKEN DREAMS MICHAEL LUV .. U HAVE WRITTEN AN EMOTIONAL EPIC SO MASTERFULLY .. JG IS RELATING TO EACH LINE ..XOXO

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 3:21:00 PM
    There is hope and that is most important. I so know about them shattered dreams Michael. I lived them. A write of renewal, of light and of the return of love. Great! One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:09:00 PM
    Ican relate to this. Its beautiful Michael. Well said! Cindy

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:14:00 AM
    If your dream is wonderfully it does not matter if it's black / white or in color. Dreams are important to keep - even daydreams. - Love it Michael. - Wish you a wonderful weekend. oxox / / hugs Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 9:44:00 AM
    Love it!!. I like how you tied dreams into it.. nice job Michael.. hugs cory

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 8:30:00 AM
    Like it Michael it says a lot in few words xx

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 8:14:00 AM
    I really enjoyed this very tremendously written work my friend! I was wasn't surprised at all with the eloquence that you used for this poem, you are always so free flowing and delightful! I feel exactly what it was you were trying to portray within this write, the loneliness and brokenness being brought out of the lost self esteem into as you so well put it, "hope and desire"(I'm assuming that is what you meant with your misspelling) What a fascinating and breathtaking poem! Great Work!!

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 9/1/2012 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the great comment as always and for the typo help, I type way to fast lol