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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 1:30:00 PM

    Every read reveals a new 'layer'...still feel the wildness, though...the ripple! :)

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 8:30:00 AM

    I've read and answered your SM.

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 8:29:00 AM

    Monsieur Aechtner,c'est un poème extraordinaire!! : ) "Plant wild flowers within your soul,/jump on,/hold on tightly,feel the unadulterated power/ripple between your thighs."!! ..."[...]freeing a voice/you've kept caged/for far too long"!! A fav! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 4:05:00 AM

    Unleashed, is a brilliant title for this Chris, this is a caring profound poem, that i confess i feel touched by, the beginning, the bio, that leads into the anger, then the superb evaluation and appreciation, of the worlds most precious animal, guess i liked this alot!!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:32:00 PM

    I mean I blocked myself.

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 8/31/2012 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haha! Wow! You can block yourself....of course. Thanks man, now there is another way of dealing with certain situations if need be lol.
  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:15:00 PM

    I deleted myself so I wouldn't have to retype. What's going on CDA?

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/31/2012 8:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah I didn't wanna retype....so I blocked myself I mean
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 8/31/2012 8:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Heya, Doc. You deleted yourself?
  1. Date: 8/31/2012 7:03:00 PM

    This speaks volume, about dimming ones own light. But it ended for me in triumph. "Trampling venom with thunder", I can heard the stampede roaring, due to freedom!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/31/2012 8:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I deleted myself, instead of retyping.