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An Old Coffin

Some lighted pumpkins Sit outside an old coffin That houses a decaying Skeleton, rotten Are the old bones from within That pet the Jack-O-Lanterns
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 9/6/2012 6:08:00 AM

    Very strong flow, especially liked the pause in the middle...never tho't about a Jackolantern being petted by a skeleton....great scene and idea!!

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 3:41:00 PM

    Very good Russell - Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox huggs // Anne-Lise :)