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Cradle Of Clouds

cosseted by cloud cushions teased by breezes, warm, then cool citrine sunlight stroking me caressed by cornflower blue

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  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:28:00 PM

    citrine sunlight... cornflower blue... richly colored word-images. Jack

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 4:02:00 PM

    charlotte, this is wonderful. soupmail.

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 8:28:00 AM

    Beautiful description, Charlotte...'cosseted by cloud cushions'...love it! - Tim

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 9:36:00 AM

    This is what you worship, nature. Your poems are psalms to colors, images, feelings that suround you. A gift not to God but to the things you get to see with your eyes. There is so much more.

    Puddifoot Avatar Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 9/4/2012 3:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    judging by the comments my 'nature worship' (lol) gave people much pleasure
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 10:46:00 AM

    To begin, much luck in the contest! A very descriptive, well written piece my friend! Should do well... love and happy thoughts, Jack

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 4:06:00 PM

    Charlotte - you write very well. This is a lovely little poem. Wish you luck in the contest! Have a nice weekend. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 3:12:00 PM

    *.* Sounds As Though A Very Serene & Wonderful Moment, Sweet Beautiful & Amazing Charlotte ~ Love The Citrine Sunlight & Teasing Breeze ~ Ahhh, Would Your Beauty Like A Drink ? Smile, I Make A Mean Martini ~ Shaken Or Stirred ? Great Poe, My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 2:03:00 PM

    Exceptional writer. I read some of your work, for me it's very impressive. The wording is immaculate! Good luck in the contest. Nette is expressive, she should dig this.