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Makes Me Smile-Makes Me Frown

MAKES ME SMILE

A bowl of Popcorn
Steaming hot and freshly popped 
 A delicious treat




MAKES ME FROWN

Morning newspaper
In a puddle, soggy-wet
 Will never be read 

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  1. Date: 8/31/2012 12:25:00 PM

    awesome, charles. that first one ALWAYS makes me smile!!! It's my all time favorite food.

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 10:58:00 AM

    Clever..like both of them...BG

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 10:19:00 AM

    So true Charles.Enjoyed your senryu.Best wishes for the contest.