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  1. Date: 9/6/2012 6:21:00 PM
    Beautiful haiku, Yasmin! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:49:00 PM
    YASMIN, ONCE AGAIN, congratulations with your xool poem in Tracie's "SPRING" contest.. always :-) PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 5:35:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Spring Is In The Air" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 3:23:00 AM
    aww, such imagery at this moment not long until the dawn, I felt your poetry, as so many mornings I am endeared by the chirping and the song of the fowl that join into the song of life~ enjoyed your poem very, very much! Cindy

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 7:21:00 AM
    ps..the part that awakens me the most is the birds giving flying lessons to their hatchlings accompanied by an exuberant symphony!

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 7:20:00 AM
    A u go again, making me get out my dictionary...this is quite a scene with it's exciting sounds...fills me with anticipation! A new fav! Thanks for your presence on my work here at the Soup...gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 4:45:00 AM
    Yassie, Congrats!!

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 2:06:00 PM
    my mareey does it again.. exuberant in all ways, yas.. super congrats!

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 11:22:00 AM
    Congrats on another fine poem and its success in the contest. BG

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 10:25:00 AM
    Congratulations Yasmin!! thanks for sharing new words to me (^_^) Cheers!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 9:48:00 AM
    Lovely string of verse!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 6:52:00 AM
    melodious write sweet yas...

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 4:53:00 AM
    love these yasmin,

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 6:37:00 PM
    Oh I love this one my dear Yasmin! So beautifully expressed with vivid descriptive words! A great piece, my friend... kudos! Big hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:35:00 AM
    Hey, this is a spring wingding with a zing!!! (i'm trying to emulate dear Robert with his rhyming comments). So this is the one you told me you had cooked up for today. Awesome, yasmin! Keep it up. I enjoyed your comment on my summer sonnet and the things you enjoyed as a child. Yes,I remember the library too. I found many a good book there as a child.

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:10:00 AM
    Yes, "natures symphony" describes it perfectly my friend! You have complied a wondrous compilation of Haiku, a natural rendition Yasmin! I just love the complete heartfelt feelings you put into your poem, the descriptions are phenomenal! I truly am amazed at the powerful words you used for this write! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 4:31:00 AM
    Ha I have just posted one about natures night time show as well .love this Yasmin, stay sweet xx