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  1. Date: 7/21/2013 6:49:00 AM
    I cried that very moment, cuz it's strange she lives in my images(not my memory). and I know I will see her again one day. Sometimes I feel as if she is still out there. her soul floating around. after all I believe she ejected from her own body the day her Alzheimer took over. nothing can explain, what's in the mind one the disease eats them away. I love my mom, I have missed her for over 8 years... I wish she'd seen me run my restaurant. she would have been proud. I know it

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 6:42:00 AM
    .you see I am generous. That way I can laugh at the stupidity of them idio--. Well I smile, in knowing c has a major vendetta against me *still* lol. glad he does. makes me feel worthy of existing.

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 5:24:00 AM
    continued. ...the second hand poem. amazing ... anyways. .back to the poem ...poets alerted me, about the conversation. lol. what have I done to the fool... sorry Friend, but im not as powerful as they think here on the only popular. I wish I could stop their dumbness. ..

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 5:16:00 AM
    Well thank you Scribe, for calling me the muse. but actually it takes just a little to discourage me. .... I was feeling good until , hours ago.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 2:42:00 PM
    Ah, the wandering mind takes many paths. You have found yours

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:03:00 PM
    i love how my mind got lost with this. touching words. loving your thoughts.. _napua_

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 2:34:00 PM
    intimate and straight from your heart, marlon... this write opens the eyes to the nature of man these days.. powerful!..;) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 9:51:00 PM
    Oh My Scribe, I had fun reading this poem. It made me realize, what do people think about when they come across a person like me. I'm like them into Christ, but, very awkward when it comes to thinking. Like you up above.. I fancied many of your thoughts,, especially this one.. "Assuming my DNA is different With your blossoming thoughts of A female dog Mutts tucking their tails Sniffing each others rear" Now that my friend, takes thinking to the extreme. love your poem~ PD

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 12:50:00 PM
    An honest look at people today.

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 5:10:00 PM
    A package where the message is just so loud and clear there is no in between.. Love this Marlon ;)

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 10:37:00 PM
    Brutally honest write bringing out the disease of hypocrisy. Brutally awaking, brutally confronting, no shadows here, no in between, straight arrow shot! Got it! And quite well written I must say!

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 2:26:00 PM
    I'm sure your thoughts would keepanyone on their toes Marlon; can't imagine you being boring! That's quite a fascinating spread you give us to read. Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:37:00 AM
    Hi marlon! So nice to hear from you! i was just thinking of you yesterday, wondering where you've been. I guess you must have felt that you needed some time to yourself after that BS on that blog. I like this poem, spoke loud and clear! hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 9:57:00 AM
    What a punch! Pure excellence as always :)

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 8:35:00 AM
    First part is brutally beautiful that ends with a very simple but cool last verse - Tim

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 8:49:00 PM
    Very powerful poetry you have here. I really loved it! Cindy

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 8:12:00 AM
    Marlon, i'm just knock out by this brilliant poem,

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 2:32:00 PM
    Powerful Marlon---Soup Mail

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 9:31:00 AM
    Scribe, I know about editing and deleting comments in member area. I just didn't realize you could block yourself....that's hilarious!

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:11:00 PM
    Marlon, are you able to delete replies on comments now? How are you doing it!?